Driving by se_400_Lux
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Description
again, the road
(driving at night)
there was a beacon
on the road
late at night
as we drove...
demanded attention
look
see
hear
listen
late at night
roadroadroadroadroad
onandon
"...you awake
yea..."
roadandroadandroadandroad
"...she was a good-friend
of my second-cousin's..."
shit...
quick snap
inspiration
everywhere
about
around
without
trying
from cuspywake/sleep
ridingthefence
whoa-look>highway lines
whitenotwhitenotwhitenot
whew-wee man
living life
yes
brings
just rewards
dialectical tension
grabs at me now:
consider,
if you had to
find inspiration
strictly, in others...
well?
don't take it personal, man
can't help it!
can't help being what
they were born to be
jus' like you
so chill...
cause
we were NOT created equal
some have the eye
some the ear
a bend
a certain way
clear and profound
(one-at-a-time)
bound to be pointed out
claimed and exclaimed
a round
and a round
yes
for them
those that
tune to those colors
hues tones
those subtle pulses
being pushed back
by the moreobvious
among-but
theyarethere!
pushing flaunting igniting
the wonder
in us all
there was never a promise
of a smooth
smooooooth
life...
the answer
always being:
/=
...you figure it out
Comments (3)
meico
some have the eye some the ear yes pellmell apropos of no'bbut fun: Coil and recoil try each twist and twist each turn and turn each twist to no avail Up’ards and out’ards betwixt and between, I seek revelations that I’ve never seen Engage and re-engage depress each clutch, clutch each depression give it the gas, avoid the brake Back’ards and for’ards to left and to right, my goal and salvation is still out of sight Clutch and coil Coil and clutch Chivvy the wheels We're moving on. Internal, external wherever I look, I can find no redemption and I don’t give a fuck! with thanks for your recent comment Mike
Chipka
Wonderful depth in so short a piece...it contains...well...poetic truth and a faint hint of whimsy that shines through on brilliant occasion. Great work. I like it quite a lot. Excellent flow and unexpected breaks and combinations. I really appreciate writing that keeps you on your toes and doesn't spoon feed. Fantastic!
auntietk
I love the flow of this, and the imagery is spot on. Nicely done!