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FAINT HEART

Writers People posted on May 20, 2008
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"Faint heart never won fair lady" the saying goes, though these days "Coy lady never won bold knight" could apply equally as well. The beginning of relationship is always difficult - each person in the would-be duo is reluctant to give out too many signals - that they wish to take it a stage further - in case they will be rebuffed. Somebody has to make the first move ... These three short poems explore the theme. FOOTSTEPS A surreptitious shuffle of feet: the first faltering footstep edges out: first steps forward are hard to take. So out of practice, unsure, slow of pace in the unfamiliar dance, feet move onward, step follows step. My feet can side-to-sidestep, leap hurdles, seek the safest niche in a sheer rock face. My feet can break brittle bones, play games, carve a cryptic code on glistening sand. My feet are fancy dancers, strong in the solemn stride, obedient. My feet forge ahead, change direction, patter patterns. My feet can precisely pause: but my feet can't step back. NEARLY We don't touch, though there is no gulf between us merely a memory of distances past: It is surely not beyond our wit or craft to heave a lifeline shrink the space and bridge this o-so-barren gap. There is simply no delusion in this wary intermesh of glances merely a tacit denial of propinquity Now is this careful prudence or just a failure to admit the proximity of it all? Or just another self-set trap another question begging answers So, my nearly love, if you can't, I will We are near, and getting nearer. WORDS In mountain meres in Mexico swims the axolotl: a tragic beast forever doomed to live eternal youth never to proudly strut the swampy shore as salamander, fiery and full-grown Such a word is affection, mothered in friendship, fathered in love. A Peter Pan of words, capable of growth yet tending to remain a safe and carefree child Connection needs caution, I grant you [as a hand in a metaphor's glove]: one could drown in the pool of affection for a lack of the sweet air of love.

Comments (21)


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RodolfoCiminelli

5:59AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Fantastic realization my friend, have a great creativity.....!!!!

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busi2ness

6:34AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Well worded Mike, the uncertainty and yet the desire to get closer and the exhilaration... I was young too, once.

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helanker

8:24AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Beautiful Image and lovely poems too. :)

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G_Mansco

8:49AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Splendid poetry, so nice and creative ;O)

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kansas

9:09AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Wonderful verses which bring back memories. Thanks.

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leanndra

9:38AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Mike, Such well written words of the hesitation to take those beginning steps towards closer relationship. For me these three poems are not about the actual age of someone young, but the memories of a more mature person remembering past relationships and the fear of rejection. In "Footsteps" we see that although the ability of the person to do many things is there, at first there is a hesitancy to take those steps that might entangle one in closer emotional contact. However once the choice is made there is no going back. In "Nearly" we see the hesitancy of both people to take those steps towards a closer personal relationship, trying to deny the attraction. Ghosts from past loves hinder the ability to be spontaneous. However once again we see that one puts aside those haunting spectres and makes the choice towards personal intimacy. In "Words" we see the most sad aspect, of a person who is so afraid of emotional commitment that they would choose to remain immature emotionally rather than to take a real chance to find love, accepting a safe affection, rather than stepping out and risking it all for love and happiness. The saying, "No guts, no glory" comes to mind. I love how you write. You make the reader think, and remember being at those places in past relationships. ;) Lea

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beachzz

10:15AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Oh my, you've taken us down this path, shown us the way, beautifully. I understand, feel, live all of it, there are so many lines that leap out at me, so many words that seem to be talking directly to ME. They make me want to quote them at great length, use them, borrow them, maybe even steal them~~~they are that good!!

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romanceworks

10:45AM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Yes, imagine what we would miss if we never took the risk. You put it so well. And striking image, too. CC

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amirapsp

12:04PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Wonderful work Mike...Hugs

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hipps13

2:38PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Hi Mike your words brought these thoughts I get clumsy and stutter me words and wonder around in the dark Your poems were a joy to read especially, like the words "the sweet air of love" scrolling back up :-) beautiful image love the colors sweet smile to you warm hug and love, Linda

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novelist

4:59PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Love and new relationships and the risk we humans take are universal topics for adults of all ages and not easily described. You have a gift for words and you conjured up our hopes and insecurities with power and clarity. The first poem struck a chord with me, possibly because I still dance--in more ways than one. All three are fine art and I find myself in each verse. I spent the afternoon with an 80 something woman who has 4 suitors, but she's afraid to move forward in any one direction. She reminded me today that life is not a dress rehearsal. How wonderful to have gifted stagehands standing in the wings to remind us all to live. Lovely graphic. Another favorite. Keep writing!

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MarciaGomes

6:09PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

MAGNIFICA OBRA,BELA CRIATIVIDADE.+++++++++5 MARAVILHOSOS POEMAS QUE NOS FALAM DO SER HUMANO E SEUS TEMORES A RESPEITO DO AMOR. AMAR É TÃO SIMPLES É DE DAR SEM QUERER ALGO ENTROCA,NÃO SEI COMO AS PESSOAS COMPLICAM TANTO.

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dhanco

7:56PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

So many brilliant and beautiful comments, Mike. I'm once again at a loss for words, but truly agree with all of them. Your words create a world of emotion, truth and beauty. Thank you.

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amota99517

9:47PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Your words paint such beautiful images and your art brings life to your words for they are the seeker of your soul and the care taker of your heart. Splendid work both in pros and art!!!!

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Meisiekind

11:57PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Oh dear friend - I am at lost for words... Unlike yourself who is the master of playing with words. I am deeply touched by all three poems and it definitely stirs the soul. Beautiful image too. Excellent work as always Mike. Hugs, Carin :)

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auntietk

12:25AM | Wed, 21 May 2008

Somewhere between too much caution and throwing it to the wind lies the possibility of something new. Beautifully written!

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SusiQ

7:38AM | Wed, 21 May 2008

I so love your first poem. It is really relevant to me at the moment! The hesitant dance and two-step shuffle of how far to go... The third one has such a different tone but has some incredible imagery! Hugs!

lil_t

4:41PM | Wed, 21 May 2008

So much truth in your writings, Mike. They take me places I want to remember and some not so much... Your artwork here is truly beautiful and fitting! Thanks for sharing! :)

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algra

5:56AM | Thu, 22 May 2008

Nice words and also a beautiful "heart" image!

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elisheba

1:35AM | Sat, 24 May 2008

you don't know how much this theme moves me, I mean it really does... because I became like a wild cat, running away or fearing the boys I might be attracted to... I used to be extremely spontaneous but I am now kinda lost and exhausted to be running backwards when I like a man :(... At the same time, this forces me to focus on myself :) I only wish things were simpler for me when it comes to deal with attraction...

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avalonfaayre

2:10PM | Sat, 21 June 2008

Beautifully done. I can't imagine going back into that realm. I don't think that my heart would stand it. Shewww.


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