- Caution BIG file - I expect critism too by PeterSchut

Poser • Pin-ups • posted on May 20, 2008

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Hello all, A new pinup. Please feel free to tell me if something isn't right. I challenge you to leave comments even if you don't want to give 5 points. I noticed I do this as well. If I don't like an image I do not give comments, nor rate the image lower then 5. So what is the point of voting if we give away only vote valued at 5 ....... Well .... nevertheless .... thanks for watching

Comments (23)

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NetWorthy

6:21PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Nice job. I would turn her body a bit so her left hip is a bit more toward the camera, leave her face as it is e.g. looking a bit over her left shoulder in the new pose. This would show her calves and heels which are a natural focal point for a pinup. Also, maybe a dim point light (colored?) on the dark side of her face. I like the spotlight, textures and pose a lot. Hey, you still get a solid 4 from me if you change nothing ;-)

axel01

6:28PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

You ain't gonna get any ... of criticism. of course ;). I admire your artwork, trully. Moarrrr, pleeeease!

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stick

6:43PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Good, well done I like it.

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redheadredhead

7:02PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Super character...but loose the hair over the nose. Shadow throws a odd shape. Other than that...AWSOME!

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Waver88

7:20PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

I agree with redheadredhead...

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doarte

7:34PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

An exciting piece of high drama, +5 from doarte's MADHOUSE

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DanB-Creations

7:49PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

It's a very nice image. Very beautiful work!

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flaviok

9:23PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Esplendido trabalho, realização excelente,aplausos (5)

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linkdink

10:01PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

You want criticism? OK: you don't post often enough. Seriously, I think she's a knockout. I agree with the comment about the hair above, but other than that minor thing, I love her pose and everything. You've got a good streak of different lighting experiments lately, with "Direct Sunlight" and "Another Simple Pinup" and this one. Of the three, I think I prefer the softer "simple Pinup" lights. But I like these shadows, too. The boots and corset thing are killer. Regarding ratings and comments: I too wish for more honest and constructive comments, and sometimes get them. But I dropped the whole ratings option awhile ago. The ratings are just a completely devalued currency.

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corpse1001

10:32PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

I really like the lighting and the pose. I prefer softer shadows but really the only problem shadows are those caused by the hair. Also avoid straight on shots. Since it works for the pose in this one maybe tilting the camera would give it more drama. Great job.

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marvini

10:51PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

Great character and lights.

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Gameforce

10:53PM | Tue, 20 May 2008

I agree with the comments about the hair on the face and moving the hip. It's an absolutely stunning piece of work though.

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RGUS

1:37AM | Wed, 21 May 2008

Ok mate.. critisim... right hand.. nose picking finger.. yeah.. the one you point with... it's bloody bend the wrong way.. I mean if she was to pick her nose like a normal bloke... it'll poke out the side of her nose bent like that....LOL... but I get your drift... it's called "tall poppy syndrome"... if you stick up too tall above the rest... you're gonna get your head chopped off. Oh... I quite like ya render too... other than that nose picking finger!

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