You Make Me Weak by vaggabondd
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Description
Lover
You make me weak
I think about you
And my world stands still
I can’t even breath
When you speak
I can’t believe
I get to be the one to hear you
I watch your lips with anticipation
Hoping when you pause
I might steal a kiss
Your eyes light up my heart
Your laugh heals my soul
The touch of your hand
Makes me glad I am a man
When you say you love me
I know you mean it
When I say I love you
I know I mean it
Sugar
I love you
Comments (11)
auntietk
Beautifully written, my poet friend. Lovely work, as usual! This is an engaging bit of poetry - you really bring your subject to life!
beachzz
Oh, the words we all want to hear from that one special person, you say it so eloquently!!!
brycek
Beautiful work Randy!!
Bossie_Boots
Your writing is amazing superb work hugs lou x
CaperGirl42
Such beautiful words!!! Zwesome work my friend big hugz anne
dhanco
Such sweet and meaningful words, Randy. Your poetry is soft, but to the point and powerful. Excellent work!
Syltermermaid
A wonderful poem again Randy!!! You say so much with your poems!!!! Marvelous and I really admire your talent!! Hugs Ute
lil_t
Delicate and precious expressions of love in your words, Randy. They touch the heart! :)
Fidelity2
Let it all out. 5+.
hipps13
such sweet words, Randy thanks for the smile wonderful work shines warm hug, Linda
robintemplar
Beautiful poem, Randy. (I'm playing catch-up...sorry to be so late) Hugz, Robin