ALONE by ObsidianLogic
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Like a dagger through the heart.
My cousin dies. Bone breaks but he doesn’t cry
Like eternity, he waits. Not knowing how he left me to burn
In this hell. I feel the chilling taunt of his voice. He tells of the garden of peace but for this moment, I feel like a beast. The black birds cry and so do I. now I feel alone in a room full of people. It is as if I am a ghost aloft in a steeple. Quiet and that is it. He still taunts but not for months. I
Feels free as a bird but suppressed like a nerd. He has met the boatman .I feel so jealous he is gone and my pursuit is hopless.stillalone as can be in a room full of people.
This poem created in loving memory of my cousin Andrew Lee Carbajaul 1989-2004 born in Albuquerque N, M died in Baja Mexico
By Michael Lee Purnell
A POEM BY MY OLDEST SON HE WANTED TO SHARE WITH THE WORLD
Comments (4)
DennisReed
Most touching Michael, your Son has talent, and heart! Bravo!
mamabobbijo
A touching tribute. It is beyond comprehension now but there will come a day when remembering him will make you smile, instead of all of the things it does right now. You have my deepest sympathy on your loss. Please feel free to drop in any time at the writers gallery talent like yours will be much encouraged. BobbiJo
LovelyPoetess
It is very hard to cope with understanding why someone is taken so young. Writing about it is often one of the best ways to work through the pain. I'm glad your son has chosen to write about it. My condolences to all of your family on the loss of someone precious.
calum5
Your way with words is perfect in all writting as evident in your children too,warmest regards and thoughts for you all,cal