The Old Wood Shed by sapa
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this the first render that I did after a couple of days messing around with vue6 inf, I guess I actually got the program around Dec 2007 and have many more images than i thought so i'll be shareing these with you in the days to come and you can let me know what I can do to improve thanks
Comments (11)
garyandcatherine
I love the compo and the idea. But where are the shadows? Because of the position of your light source, the image looks extremely flat and 2d. NO depth to it. If on the other hand, you placed your light source at either 11:30 or 2:30 you would be creating shadows and still illuminating the front edges of your trees and bldg. Drama and imagination is created not only in composition, but in the lighting. Lighting directs the eye and focuses the viewers attention to specific element(s) of your image. As this stands, there is no focus because the lighting has no strong and weak points. Sorry for being overly critical, but you asked for advice. The image itself is fine, just reposition your light source and re-render. I am sure if you spend about 10 minutes experimenting you will find something much nicer and more alluring to the eyes.
sapa
your much kinder than I am to myself that is one of the things that draws me to admire what so many of you do the lights and shadows and the depth of field that brings, thatnks for the advice
kenmo
A very delightful render.....
gillbrooks
It IS sometimes hard to get the lighting/shadow balance just right. You can always add extra lighting if needed too. This is a really lovely scene setup - the trees are really gorgeous!
kenwas
I like your vege work and once you get the lighting the way you want it, you will have a fine image!
PhilW
Very natural looking vegetation, great scene!
Schnuck
Excellent work!!!
Domi48
I agree with Garyandcatherine and Kenwas. Personnally, I try to work 2 things: composition and light. And many other little things like rocks, plants, stones, textures... hem!
lingrif
Nice vegetation work!
Realm_Of_Illusion
I like your composition with the trees, it's very nice :)
novelist
There's a mysterious atmosphere yearning to get out here. I'd love to see this one revised with the above suggestions one day because it has so much potential. I like the landscape a lot and that little cabin is great. I often struggle with lighting, so, it was great for me to read the comments here and learn.