Ocean Storm in Oil by Artbylorraine

2D • Sea/Undersea • posted on Jul 12, 2008

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This is actually unfinished. I would like some critiques on it since I haven't done oil painting in years and years. It is 22" X 30". I would love it if you could give me some pointers on improving it. Thanks. Lorraine

Comments (7)

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Fidelity2

2:39PM | Sat, 12 July 2008

Very well done. 5+.

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Artbylorraine

3:13PM | Sat, 12 July 2008

Thanks! I am still new at this oil painting medium but am having a ball with it. I thank you for commenting.

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timspfd

9:22PM | Sat, 12 July 2008

It has a look reminiscent of Thomas Hart Benton The very bottom sixth or so of it doesn't work quite as well for me. I think it's perhaps a little busy, where I would expect fewer but bigger movements closer to me and smaller farther away. It's great though and could easily be considered done.

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Artbylorraine

11:29AM | Sun, 13 July 2008

Thanks, Timspfd, I appreciate the comments. Now I know what is wrong with it. Something bothered me, too and now I know what it was. Thank you so much.

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