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Nightfall: Firewire

Digital Comics Science Fiction posted on Jul 15, 2008
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They'd talk about the dust at the orphanage like it was some kind of disease. The story would be that you only got it by kissing, drinking contaminated water, or eating meat from animals grazing in the open. Fact was it was everywhere and nowhere. It's true that people and things physically transported it around, and it could travel around in the air for a short distance, but the truth is that a lot of the dust was kinda dead or dormant. Autocracy scientists figured out pretty quickly that the dust could activate at random, run amok for a while if somebody was unlucky, then die away just as quickly. Sometimes the victims just plain died, other times, they kinda changed, did crazy things. Worst sort were the ones that turned into something completely alien. Nobody knew much about those, so the stories were even more lurid to make up for it. I couldn't believe it when I started to hear about the drug gangs. I heard names like Firewire, Surge, WhiteLight, and Serenity, four words in a long list of nicknames for refined and segregated dust. It seemed that underworld scientists and chemists like their government counterparts had discovered there were different kinds of dust. Like snowflakes or diatoms under a microscope, dust came in a range of geometric forms and families, which when classified and concentrated had different properties. Some lunatic had decided to see what affect the different types had on an animal, and it wasn't long till someone tried it on a human. Rumour has it that nothing happened to begin with, but as the scientists learned more and the purity rose, they started to see temporary but measurable effects. Firewire was the variety of choice for hoodlums and thugs, giving them fast reflexes and accurate aiming, while Surge was the preferred drug for working long and arduous hours. WhiteLight and Serenity gave mental clarity and peace in equal measure. There were others with rumoured effects that belonged in the pages of fiction. All of them had side effects, and the stories that circulated about grotesque transformations or horrific deaths only added to the ghastly mythology that surrounded the trade. My new job shifting concrete and equipment is no picnic, so looking around at the guys on my work crew, I gotta wonder which of them is taking something, and if a monster could be sleeping amongst us. -- Joshua Isuza, Zone B2, Candor City M3 figure with Xurge SF casuals and Hiro figures rendered with custom shaders in Poser 6. Final image created with Illustrator and Photoshop CS2. Still thinking that the 'Autocracy' used to be called something else, look over there at the Hypno-toad, the Hypno-toad is your friend, trust the Hypno-toad....

Comments (8)


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mmitchell_houston

12:29PM | Tue, 15 July 2008

I like the individual images (again, you should be teaching a class on coloring and properly shading hair for comic book work), and I like how the simplicity of the background conveys a modern/Sci Fi feel without being cluttered or distracting. But the actual layout of the panels is troublesome for me. The main problem I have is that the characters, who are supposed to be interacting (with their fists by the end of the page) are not even looking at each other. Although he is looking at them, they are staring of into space, rather than at his chiseled bod which is the dominant image on the page (love those kneepads – great little details). The engagement of the story just breaks down for me at that point. Also, there is a problem with the placement of the first word balloons. In the West, we read left to right and top to bottom. So, my eyes immediately went to the left-most balloon, which is actually his response to the question asked at the top of the next panel. This was awkward and could be easily fixed by moving your title a bit and stretching her balloon out of her panel so it’s the first one that is read – this would enhance your storytelling and create a more natural flow. Finally (man, I’m just rambling on today, aren’t I?), I’m not clear on who threw the first punch. That sort of detail helps to quickly establish his character: is he a hot head hitting anyone who annoys him, or did she throw the first punch and he’s responding to violence (in other words, “If you start it I’ll finish it.”). This last part is just a thought, but if you moved the punch to the next page, it would give you space to put in a panel of him or her glaring at the other and you would then have more space to show the start of the fight sequence. Anyway, sorry to babble on like this. You know I’m a fan and I can’t wait to see where you take us this time! Thanks, as always, for posting! And am I wrong for sensing a Shadowrun influence here? I really liked that game many years ago, so I must admit that gives me a twitter of excitement to see what kind of mutations your going to play with in this story. As for an alternate name for Autocracy... how about just The Government (always capitalizing the T in The)? Can't wait to see more!

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MarkHirst

1:08PM | Tue, 15 July 2008

Thanks for the feedback, I have made some adjustments.

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Biffowitz

2:31PM | Tue, 15 July 2008

Very cool artwork, I like the style!

thgirw

5:54PM | Tue, 15 July 2008

Awsome comic book look great work

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geirla

9:51PM | Tue, 15 July 2008

Nice comic and story line!

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PoserHobbit

4:49AM | Thu, 17 July 2008

Excellent!!

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Star4mation

1:57PM | Thu, 17 July 2008

Cool comic book style Mark :)

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Heathcroft

11:32AM | Fri, 05 September 2008

I like this retro style, Excellent work.


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