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I need critique.....please!
Comments (18)
Umbetro38
The only critic I have is - the Light - you can create so many settings in the Atmos - more realistic light and shadows - but i like your scene - looks like a little story and i love angels - very well done friend
NekhbetSun
The only thing I would say is give a little more texture to the man's shirt to make it a little more realistic....other than that, I love it and fantastic job and neat idea !
Schnuck
Fine work!!!
Darkwish
Nice, very nice pic! Very well done!
Dotthy
outstanding scene!!!!!!!!
Ourias3D
You need critique, why ? Which was the purpose to reach ? This image is very successful !
ledwolorz
Super scene and work.
arwenone
Wonderful work!
Tanglimara
The image is very good without critique ... but as you asked for some I agree with NekhbetSun in that the mans shirt could do with some textures. Also the image could be more realistic, but who am I to say that as that is what I'm struggling to achieve at the moment. Overall this is very pleasing on the eyes. Ton.
Mondwin
Stunning scene...bravissima!V:DDD.Hugsxx
brewgirlca
I think the conept is great and the scene is very well laid out. The foreground reflection work is excellent. Yes the shirt needs some work. But my concern, and only since you ask, is that this is a hot, clear sunny day and yet the only strong shadows that I see are on the angel wings. So the scene looks a bit flat. I think that you need some more ray traced or even depth mapped shadows... especially under his body. And if POV were lifted a bit you would have more ground to play with for shadow work. Just my humble opinion.
tetsu-pino
Very nice render!!!
clam73
for me is a great vue work, well composed and rendered....but if you want a suggest I'm with brewgirlca....maybe with little adjustment on the shadows your work would be perfect....but anyway, like I said before it's a great scene!
drahzar
ok here my critique.A great render and good light
gunsan
Since I have my difficulties liking Poser images and similar, I am not the right person to give critique, but I like the idea, very creative!
nelli
Sehr schön die Bilder alle wie sie da sind super Arbeiten klasse
OrphanedSoul
you should try an ambiant light source as the shadows are from a spotlight and look this way, great concept though and also the grey shirt on the man is just wrong somehow, as is the soil. try to think what would I see in this situation, there would be maybe more clouds and godrays or a water line on his pants a crab or two, think for this style water colors. Look around for small details!
kahun.hida
こんな島に漂着したいもです、すばらしい作品です！！！！！