Reminds me of a kid I used to go to school with, went by the name of Elric....

i like your drawings, you have kinda your own style... what i'm thinking: If u ink in fine small lines, it's very difficult to color it, and especcially the lighting. I'd try em without the lightings, just the flat colors, it makes your lines more important with this coloring, your lines are at second place.... and your lines deserve better... just because everybody colors like this, doesnt mean u have to also... dunno if u understand this (crappy english) but EMPTY lines require FULL coloring.... FULL lines, require no/flat coloring.... look at the french comincbook-artists (i think they're the best) they use no extra lightning, and tell u all with lines... try that also, working with inkpens... takes a while to get the hang of it, but it gives your comics life...... ill stop bitching now... good job anyway