Everyday Teen II by kobaltkween
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and here she is with postwork. V4, Rachel by Thorne and Sarsa, Quarker's Radiant Jaguar Hair, and my shaders, hair texture and face morph.
Comments (14)
mikeerson
looks like there is a smear on her lip from the lipstick - teen age Kissing??? Looks good.
Rutra
I really like what you've done to the lighting with the postwork. The raw version was a bit flat, you've added depth. The hair looks much better too. I like her morph and expression, very realistic, like a real person. The eyes may be big but there are lots of women with big eyes (my mother has eyes as big as your character's).
Krid
wonderful portrait with excellent expression and skin texture
JOELGLAINE
Very realistic looking in comparison to the raw work. She seems older than teen-age due to her eyes looking old. They must have seen a lot of bad things. I can't explain it better than that. Great portraiture!
qoob
really amazing postwork on this!!! only one little issue: her right wearer is too bright for his position in the shadow.
shantay
Love her expression!
theSea
always appreciate the before and after versions on these.
chexm1x
Great expression, the eyes are awesome
ArtPearl
She is a very pleasant teen. Perhaps that isnt an 'everyday' teen but I like her like this. The play of light/shadow is much richer in this image. You always make the hair look so much better in post. The smear above the lip is the only flaw in my opinion.
dphoadley
Shadow and contrast have been greatly improved, but the line of the upper lip needs to be softened. It looks like it's being folded up by an invisible finger. Your works though show great talent, and are an inspiration to all. Yours truly, DPH
imaga
Un hermoso retrato, me encanta la expresión, muy bien hecho!
faaeria
I compared both pictures and have to agree with the rest. This one looks better. As been said her face isn't flat, hair looks perfect. I think her lips looks good and natural - she's smiling, so upper lip gets 'stretched'. (I would only get rid of that line over her mouth.) Morph is very good IMHO. She looks 13-14 y.o to me :)
delaorden_ojeda
lovely face, wonderful portrait, superb textures and light !
linkdink
Very nice expression. Don't think I've seen Vicky make that one before.