Emotional by KristiS
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How do we part after all these years,
reality has become one of my biggest fears.
Losing you will create alot of pain,
but no longer am I able to stand the rain.
Your love is like a rollercoaster this much is true,
Just know in my heart there will always be love for you.
The words you speak sometimes hurt so bad inside
and the way you act makes me want to cry.
I feel you will be happy doing your own thing,
and thank you so much for asking me to where this ring.
Alot you have taught me over the years,
but now it is time to get over my fears.
I think it is time for this ring to come off now,
I will never forget the day we said our vows.
They meant alot to me then and they still do,
but baby your actions are making us blue.
You don't want to listen to what I have to say,
you want everything to always go your way.
It will be okay, we will be just fine,
you will forever be in my heart and mind.
We did have alot of good laughs,
please remember them as we go down our seperate paths.
Remember the laughs, remember the tears,
remember the joy throughout the years.
Remember what you learned from me,
I will take what I learned from you.
I'm sorry, I just can no longer take the unheartfelt love from you.
Comments (9)
KristiS
I am sorry...another sad poem. I am going through a very rough time right now and have come to a sad realization of what I must do. Hopefully some day I will be blessed enough to be loved in a way I deserve and then I can write some happy poetry. Until then, I still hope you enjoy reading my poems. Thank you for your support!
hipps13
very heartfelt words warm hug for you, Linda
katy555
Excel! l' love is a party of the mysteries of the life…
KristiS
Thanks for the hug...I am sending one right back to ya Linda : )
Chipka
Touching writing! So many of us "have been there" more times than we may care to admit, and the words you've written here sculpt and honest mood. But for as rough as the rough patches can be, when we get through them, we're that much stronger for the experience and well...they become a part of who we are...and I like to think that people in general, are a pretty cool bunch of critters. Oh, we can me messy as all get-out, in more ways than one, but what your poem captures here is also the more tender side of things that are always sensed most strongly when things fall apart. Great work. Touching.
beachzz
I know how this is--be strong.
henryotisclarke
Cold Turkey I think of this hunger within me, Remembering times of bliss with you, Wanting again the injection of your soul, Your heart that is the delicious drug, But reality has set in deep and freezing, The acute awareness of distant finality, The knowledge of what was not to be, Eats into my wooden heart like termites. Going cold turkey And this withdrawal is so painful, Going Cold Turkey, The flashbacks come so fiercely, Going Cold Turkey, From the hot psychic connection, And the blow of cool rejection, Which lingers in the wound of my heart. Your poem demanded a response from my heart....it was lovely.
E.Houser
Very passionate words, and heartfelt.
blonderella
never apologize for your emotions...sadness is a part of life...without it, there would be no happiness, just as there can be no night without day, or no up without down...the yin and yang of life...balance and counter balance...sadness just makes you embrace and appreciate happiness all the more! you are a good writer!