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Looking In The Mirror

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Oct 26, 2008
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Looking In The Mirror She looks at who she is And always sees The same face The same woman But lately that woman Doesn’t look the same She knows something Is different It’s not a new haircut Or new clothes It’s not anything As easy as that It comes from Way down deep Much further From her very soul It’s a new vision Of her life Of the people She knows She looks And some of it Is hard to see Isn’t very pretty Because she knows She’s been deceived Hurt abandoned Left to her own devices BUT-- no matter These new visions Clear her mind Purge her soul Wipe the slate clean She moves forward Free light radiant Full of new love And life No one can Catch her For she’s Flying In her Newfound freedom The mirror Reflects this New woman In all her glory All her power Her strength Catch her if you can 10/25/08

Comments (10)


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auntietk

3:11AM | Sun, 26 October 2008

Wow. Awesome work! Powerful and well written.

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sharky_

4:20AM | Sun, 26 October 2008

Nice colors... Aloha

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tallpindo

4:37AM | Sun, 26 October 2008

It's easier when you are the victime of treachery or deception. You can cutoff the last pangs of interest. The friends and acquaintances who still had a hold have burned their bridges and gone off to seek fame and fortune elsewhere. The letters and phone calls decrease in frequency then a move gets missed a phone number dropped an address no longer receiving mail. The mirror is it more than a clear breath shield in the cafeteria at the buffet? Isn't it just to keep from infecting the public? The hand when it goes out feels the water faucet. When you turn it off make sure it doesn't drip. The soul has a hold on a long pipe that is cold and hard. Can you trust it when you are out in the park? The air is clear and the grass is dry. The trees mask the sun. Do you have a bottle in a brown paper bag you can share? That pipe connects to a big city. The bag is just local surrounded by raw nature.

PD154

6:24AM | Sun, 26 October 2008

What a beautiful expression of feelings, well writen Marilyn!

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gypsyflame

8:15AM | Sun, 26 October 2008

I loved this...it had a beautiful depth to it...and it spoke from the heart and soul....very well written!

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vaggabondd

7:45PM | Sun, 26 October 2008

Man I really like your work. this is great stuff my friend :)

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Ionel

7:56PM | Sun, 26 October 2008

I would really love to believe her! I would really love to be so easy!!! :)

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jocko500

9:25PM | Sun, 26 October 2008

wonderful words and image

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Thelby

3:38PM | Tue, 28 October 2008

Nice words in this one girlie. You can really feel them!!!

gwenevere

6:27AM | Thu, 06 November 2008

by Gewnevere Marilyn,this has great depth. I have read it several times and each time pick up something new. Wonderful


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