Lost Thoughts (II) by kobaltkween
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Description
my head is filled
with thoughts like lights
hidden by shadows and fog
they slip between my fingers
float out of
the reach of my hands
drift into darkness
they spiral around me
some close
some distant
as silence fills my mouth
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and here's the one with words. i don't think they work as well (too distracting and hard to read). again, i was experimenting, and i felt it was a chance i should take and that i should share that risk taking.
thanks for viewing and commenting!
Comments (7)
mikeerson
THE image being dark is good... I would highlight the words and maybe even fade them from solid to faint... But I think this is calling for some highlights to help it stand out - the words would be my choice to highlight... I hope that ads to your creativity of this image - I like it... Lost in thought is easy to do... I do it a lot more when I'm stressed.... I've been lost in thought waaaaaayyyy tooooo much lately - lol ARE YOU EVER GOING TO GIVE YOURSELF AN AVATAR?????????????
moonbunnie
Very moody and wonderful image and words , nice work!
imaga
Una idea excelente y una soberbia realización, muy bien hecho!
loligagger
I like this one also!!!!!!!!!!!
kasalin
Wonderful image and very nice lyrics !!! 5++++++++++++ Hugs :):):)
novelist
Good poem. I love how you worked the words in with the image and the pose is wonderful. It's hard to see on my screen. Darkness is important and effective here, but I wish I could see a bit more.
ArtPearl
I think this is an extraordinary image, and a very worthwhile experiment. I like the idea of combining verbal and non verbal methods of communication. However I also had difficulties seeing it on my screen. (Although I know my screen isnt perfectly calibrated). I really hope you will do more along experimental lines like this.