Broken by auntietk

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Nov 10, 2008

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BROKEN Broken Into a million pieces My hands search the pile For meaning Something recognizable Solid I turn a piece Pick it up Put it down My hands falter Fall still Defeated There is nothing In these shattered remnants That is familiar But still ... My hands flutter Over the pile of shards Those fragments of my heart Broken Into a million pieces The day we said goodbye .......... From the archives ... .......... Title page created in ArtRage and CS3

Comments (20)

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beachzz

1:07AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Yes, you say it so well.

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Meisiekind

1:46AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Oh Tara... I feel the pain. An all too familiar feeling that none of us want to experience. Excellent...

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durleybeachbum

3:09AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Superb!

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NekhbetSun

5:31AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Boy, hasn't just about everyone been thru that pain and angst....beautiful and touching, dear T !

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JeffG7BRJ

5:52AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

That second verse I thought you were talking about Ronnie and his crockery from yesterday. #:0) I guess there are quite a few fella's that can relate to this as well Tara, fortunately I am not one of them. I'm one of the lucky ones I guess. Excellent work. Bravo!!!!!

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helanker

6:58AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Very sad, but beautiful little poem, Tara.

PD154

7:16AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Aptly put my dear, my first thought was sympathy for my broken china lol, but seriously, a heartfelt prose!

lucindawind

7:32AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

wonderful writing ..

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erlandpil

8:54AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Wonderfult erland

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barbdennist

9:32AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Beautiful and touching words. You have such a gift for putting these thoughts from a place deep in your soul down on paper. I wish I had that gift.

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cannonn

9:59AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

so much beautiful!!!!

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Janiss

11:39AM | Mon, 10 November 2008

A fantastic work Tara!

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Lunastar

7:26PM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Amazing poetry!

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tofi

7:27PM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Tara, so articulate and beautifully expressed. What a sad, but most lovely poem. It speaks from the heart, and directly to the heart, and reaches deep down evoking such intense emotion--a most admirable gift that you have. The colours and the very font of the image seem to speak for themselves; and the poem. Most wonderful and powerful composition!

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lizzibell

9:43PM | Mon, 10 November 2008

nice work...

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hipps13

9:44PM | Mon, 10 November 2008

Hi Tara May broken can mean body too the pieces never fitting right again what came to me mind when I read your words I really like this warm hug and love, Linda Kaye

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Merrylee

4:03PM | Thu, 13 November 2008

Very well put....

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Chipka

10:38PM | Thu, 13 November 2008

WOW! There is truth, and then there is poetic truth...the second is always far more intense and visceral than the first. This is a gorgeous, and harrowingly true piece of writing. It moves with an elegant grace that I appreciate greatly, and the image that accompanies it works perfectly! Great stuff and I'm glad I'm catching up on viewing.

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