when it rains by NothingNess
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I get lost In the thunderous Constant drumming Changed my frequency Exploring this new plane Rained all day there Waved to you From under My red umbrella As I went on Skipping in the rain Watch... Yes, I jumped Knee deep into The black puddle Want to know Need to know Do you know The way to go A foray through time Swiping at smoke Grabbing at air For knowledge that Was once there A certain purity A Harmony Sanity Come comfort Comfort me
but it never rains; a drizzle is just not the same!
Comments (7)
Fidelity2
Hey this one is really cool.
auntietk
The images you paint are so clear ... I can see the umbrella, the puddle, feel my hand close on thin air ...
DennisReed
Superb!
Storm9167
Nice poem.. Love the rain of course, not that I get to enjoy anything I love anymore..
beachzz
Soft, sweet images with just a touch of something else, uncertainty, maybe?
nicesmallflame
ahem... that right shoulder seems familiar to me???
kasalin
Excellent words and writing !!! " Five stars " Hugs Karin :)