Unsaid, Undone by beachzz

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Nov 19, 2008

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Unsaid, Undone Words unsaid Deeds undone Pretending Unhearing Neverending It goes on and on And on Don’t hear it Don’t say it Let it be Won’t make it Untrue It goes on and on And on One day Words said Deeds done Heard it said it All true The end 11/10/08

Comments (18)

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brother_meed

12:37PM | Wed, 19 November 2008

FINAL-to-the-point> .

West_coaster07

12:52PM | Wed, 19 November 2008

Excellent!!!

PD154

12:58PM | Wed, 19 November 2008

No holds barred...Nicely put Maz...on a funnyside sounds like a regular Friday night out in my old days :)

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tallpindo

1:36PM | Wed, 19 November 2008

Attempted procrastination is not a crime manana.

M2A

1:46PM | Wed, 19 November 2008

Thanks 4 sharing such intriguing and warm piece, love it.

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photostar

1:59PM | Wed, 19 November 2008

How true your words, Marilyn. Love the sea capture to go with the narrative.

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JeffG7BRJ

2:08PM | Wed, 19 November 2008

Yes I can relate to that I think, more so now, things left undone, I try can't do it, call someone in they do it instead. Excellent bit of prose Marylin. Bravo!!!!!

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