Team Work by hipps13

Bryce • (none) • posted on Dec 15, 2008

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Maybe Can anyone understand? Unless they wear my shoes I hope they never fit another The rubber breaks the soul Am I so misunderstood? The way I write The way I talk Stuttering or gesticulating To get the words out Will I ever heal from the pain? Of anger and missed opportunities? Will the tears stop falling? An endless dripping stream What is this brewing inside me? Why is it there? Why does it scare me? Why does it open my eyes? Will a kind ear just listen? Will you respond in tune When I read, think, and write? Can words open new worlds And thoughts rewrite? Can I go outside the door And inside my soul to breathe? Can I learn? To outgrow the fears And maybe, just maybe Find a patch of sunlight For the blossom to bloom And learn to smile again? I mean really smile Inside my core ©2008-12-15 Faroutsider/LKS Collaboration I had fun, Craig (faroutsider) Getting to know The excitement created Many smiles Different thoughts Interest views Development grows Variety of words Or changes a phrase Thank YOU Also, thank you Keith (photostar) For suggesting the collaboration A big warm hug for you Thank you so much So much appreciated Nice day for a smile

Comments (29)

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TallPockets

12:09PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

WONDERFUL words and art!! .... I luv the WORD, T E A M .... There is no "I" in T E A M as we always learned in SPORTS in my youthful days. I also learned, that at some point in life, you can either be a PLAYER in life or a VIEWER .... Or, to put it in MY simpleton analogies, "SWING Batter!" .... WINK. My BEST to you and yours, KIND SOUL .... TallPockets/brian.

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photostar

12:10PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Wonderful collabative work, Linda. I had an intuitive feeling that both you and Craig (faroutsider) would work well together in team efforts such as this. Many thanks for the mention and I look forward to viewing and commenting on many more from both of you.

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adrie

12:17PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Wonderful work, and a excellent job on the reflections....well done.

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carlx

12:36PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Wonderful golden tones and atmosphere, Lin!!!

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JeffG7BRJ

1:56PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

The image shows a team of four people at least, maybe more when I peruse it at my leasure, I can see at least four faces at a glance. It's always nice to be a team player rather than an outsider, a loner. There is always someone that understands, the hard part is finding that person, it's a shame they are so rare. No need to wear your shoes just read the writen word, pain never heals entirely but it lessens to a certain degree. Nice image, awesome words, good team work both of you. Bravo!!!!!

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OrphanedSoul

2:38PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Wonderful colors and reflections in the colors of fall!

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faroutsider

2:56PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Wonderful image, Linda - warm, reflective, mysterious and very beautiful. Thanks, my friend, for the opportunity to share ideas, open doors and challenge preconceptions of what is possible... and have so much fun in the process!

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Miska7

3:06PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Very nice colours and reflections! Great work.

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lyron

3:52PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Great work!!

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dbrv6

3:54PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Great image and love the colors and reflections on this. Your poem brings something to mind I heard that goes something like once we can forgive ourselves for wanting a better past we can learn to enjoy the now we have.

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Star4mation

4:24PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

A real beauty Linda, words and image, top stuff :)

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Richardphotos

5:47PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

happy birthday Linda and awesome Bryce.I see several faces in your columns

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Eleandras

6:23PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Like always a beautiful artwork!

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auntietk

6:42PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Full view is spectacular ... truly worth a closer look. I love the wall, the distortions, the flow, the color. Gorgeous work! Your collaboration with Craig is wonderful. You make a good team ... I can see both your hands on the pen, hear both your voices. Beautifully done! I hear hope in your words, and curiosity, and the possibility of seeing things in a new way. I will hope with you, for you, my friend. I do believe there is nothing in life that can't get better. Sending you love and hugs, Tara May

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2Loose2Trek

7:01PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Beautiful poem and artwork ... well done.

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Fidelity2

9:01PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Cool work, my friend. 5+.

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vaggabondd

10:39PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Nice work my poet friend :)

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amota99517

11:17PM | Mon, 15 December 2008

Beautiful work in both composition and pros. Both are heart felt and well done. I would think that they light will come gently and lift the spirit of the words. Awesome work!

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beachzz

1:21AM | Tue, 16 December 2008

Wow, a wonderful combination--great work!!

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KarmaSong

3:11AM | Tue, 16 December 2008

Wonderful work on lightings and textures, Linda. An atmospheric abstract I like very much.

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Zazou

3:53AM | Tue, 16 December 2008

Wonderful image and poem ! Bravo !!

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artaddict2

4:10AM | Tue, 16 December 2008

Powerful and haunting words, flowing like they will wash away any hurt or pain and that day WILL come when you WILL really smile once again. great Team-work and beautiful image! ;-)

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