Dark Inside by Alealonna
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Sorry that I haven't written anything but, after my wrist healed fully, my computer died. So since all of my pictures died with it I decided that I would write you all a poem. I am getting a new computer soon, but until then you will just have to deal with my poetry. I am in a slightly dark mood today.
In this darkened atmosphere
I watch you in tainted fear
You will always be my prey
So why don't you give up and stay
I will always rip you down
Every time that you are found
I'm your fears in living form
I am your worst lightning storm
You will beg to go and die
But I will keep you just alive
Until that time when I get bored
I will end it in torture
Comments (10)
Faemike55
Nice poem! I like it I've felt that way at times. Sorry to hear about the computer. Hope you can salvage your stuff off the old one
Demented_She-Penguin
Damn, I love your dark poems. I know that the mood you need to be in to wright them is kinda sucky, but its always its nice to know that you can create something so awesome out of something so bad. I'm so sorry about your computer. Its so typical though, get back your ability to use your computer and then it croaks on you... Murphy's law. Well, I hope you get out of the dark soon. Can't wait to read more of your wonderful poems. Take it easy girl. ~Alice
barryjeffer
Hahahahaha...nice dark mood. Love it, tickles me deep inside to the core. seth
brother_meed
... very nice recipe I can tell you can build a warm fire, too... b.
Iceshark39
Beautifully written. Ah, those days of somber, morose dwellings, captured perfectly in verse. Nicely done.
experimental
I never fail to enjoy a little darkness in my day, well put.
icerian
Never mind, take it easy, if you can. Better days are on horizon dear Alealonna.
kasalin
Sometimes I feel exactly like this. Very nice poem, dear Jess :)
Jonicc
when i die no one will care... when i die no one will know... for no one knows me... i am the light in the day... and the drakness in the night... for i am... dead...
vaggabondd
Wow that is a little dark but I like it haha, good stuff