Aranée 18: The Eastern Pass
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Aranée bit down on a curse and pulled Kuila closer to quiet him.
She had broken camp and bade farewell to Galen at sunrise, returned to Melius to retrieve her gear and some supplies, and was well on her way to the pass by midday. In the early afternoon a cold wind blew in low brooding clouds and a miserable light rain settled onto the Aeritan. Following the healer's directions, she traced a faint forgotten road to the northeast and arrived, wet and miserable, a little before dusk.
What she saw couldn't have been more discouraging. A sprawling Greener camp lay at the base of the mountains, at the very entrance to the pass itself. Counting the campfires, tents and men she could see, she estimated more than fifty men in the camp itself. At least a dozen more roamed the periphery in deadly three-man patrols. Men were constructing light cabins or wooden floors for their tents, clearly preparing to settle in for the winter.
She patiently waited until well after dark before circling around to try to gain entrance to the pass. Twice she and Kuila had barely gotten under cover in time to avoid a passing patrol. They hadn't been so lucky the third time.
A thunderstorm now raged and the sodden ground and rock were treacherous. She lost her footing and hit the ground with an audible thump just as a patrol rounded an outcropping. The Greeners froze into statues, listening intently. At some unseen signal, they silently split up, searching in different directions in ever-widening circles around their original position.
Now she and Kuila huddled and watched as a burly no-nonsense Greener searched dangerously close by, weapon ready, crouching and alert. She lay quietly as she could but eased her hand onto the hilt of the Elvish sword, silently drawing it. Just when she thought he couldn't possibly miss them, a loud shout and laugh from one of the men caused the big man to turn and bolt to the sound. She slowly exhaled and realized that she had been holding her breath. After a short while, it became obvious what had saved her: One of the sentries had found a hapless goat that had wandered into camp. She owed her life to a creature destined to be on a spit or in a cook pot within the hour.
Carefully moving away from the camp, at length she finally felt safe enough to stop and take stock. She felt a sudden twinge from her back and shoulder and winced a bit. Healer Amikas would be very angry with her - her bandages were saturated with rain and mud. A cold wind blew and she pulled her cloak around her. Looking up into the rain towards the unseen mountaintops, she decided this must be the first cold weather storm of the season - snow likely was already falling in the highest elevations.
The lion cub nervously paced around her a few times before sitting, leaning against her, nervously fidgeting while alertly looking into the darkness in the direction of the camp. Hefting the Elvish sword in her hands, she idly fingered the intricate inlay, lost in thought. After a short while, she had made her decision.
"Come on Kuila, let's go see if Galen's offer is still on the table."
--- TO BE CONTINUED!
The story will make the most sense if you view the episodes in sequence.
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Image and story © 2009 Larry Hodge
Comments (49)
JaneEden
You have amazing writing skills and your artwork fits with your words beautiful. Superb work!! hugs Jane xx
popeslattz
Excellent scene and story. The atmophere and mood are near perfect. The descriptions in the story are well thought out. Looking forward to reading more. Are you familiar with ArtZone? They're having a book cover competition that I think you'd be a shoe-in to win.
ledwolorz
Wonderful story and scene.
BenBischop
Cool Work....!!
drifterlee
Wonderful action and mood!
theprojectionist
Looks awesome up close Bravo
dbrv6
Excellent story and well done on creating the background with the fires of the camp.
atlas7
This rainy night is very well done !! And we can discover a lot of details in fullscreen !! Great work !! 5+
restif
I missed this one! Glad I checked, looks super, the lightning in the distance adds a bit more forboding! Great work and story!
morganahope
WOW...I AGREE WITH DENSA !!! WONDERFUL STORY AND POWERFUL SCENE !!
amirapsp
Stunner indeed...WOW
ragouc
Very good POV and pose.
e-brink
Excellent atmosphere. I like the tension in this!
Kyronimos
Wow! This is realy fantastic!
Darkwish
You did very lovely pic!
mgtcs
Absolutely fantastic work and story, excellent done! 10+
Danny_G
excellent work
DMFW
Super image and well written words to accompany it...
RJS
Wow - this scene is a quantum leap in complexity! Roxy's right about dark scenes, and this one also has lightning and rain! Bravo, sir, you have outdone yourself here. The composition here is excellent, as is the posing (especially Kuila). Once again you have perfectly captured a scene from the text. The story is really becoming complicated now. I see that you have cleverly combined the change in weather with Aranée's change of mind. Truly you are a master storyteller! The rest of us can only sit, green with envy at your skills, and read on...