Teenage Sue Riding Bareback by dphoadley
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Description
My remapped P5Judy is riding bareback (because she loves the feel of the horse between her thighs) on my remapped P4Horse.
Rendered in Poser 5 against a blank background, and then juxtaposed in Photoshop against a freebie background photo.
Comments (20)
VDH
Great composition! Excellent work!!
Mogwa
David, this is very fine work. I just hope that girl hasn't been hitting the bottle, or she'll lose her license!
romangirl
How did you know I could ride bareback? Without drinking. Marvelous!
Holler
I really like this image. The pose and atmosphere work for me. Unique pose for the girl. That said the perspective seems off. It's as if the Girl/Horse are twisted to the plane of the background. I don't do postwork so I can't suggest anything in that respect, but would this image be possible in Poser with the BG image on a prop (perhaps blurred to give a fake DOF).
gibby.g
This title works for me, although I half expected (hoped) Sue would be barebacked! I noticed the perspective problem indicated by Holler. I think it's caused by your Poser camera having a different focal length setting to the one in the photo. I'd recommend re rendering the girl on the horse at different focal lengths until you find one that fits better. More telephoto, I think. Better yet if you correct it my critique will look foolish. LOL Great idea, I love the pose and the colour you've done the horse shows up a lot more detail than the black one.
LostinSpaceman
The displacement appears to be better in this image but still a tad on the high side. I'd recommend making sure it's turned off for the eye whites, pupils and iris. Unless the horse is startled I really shouldn't be seeing so much eye white I don't think.
Indoda
As they have all said - now they idea is great, the horse and background are great, the girl looks a little off - her head looks a little flattened but that could be eye site ;) LOL Well done
ArtPearl
I find this image nicer to look at than the 'ride tall' one. The horse's colors are definitely better, and his pose is lively. The girl's pose should be 'floppier' if she is unconscious or asleep her (left) arm will just fall down vertically. Her feet may be locked together, but the rest of her left leg would still flop down or sideways. And her breasts wouldnt point up like that either.You(or someone else near you) should actually try the pose(if you dont have a horse handy, try on a bench or something).
Fidelity2
So cool on your part my friend. 5+.
TrekkieGrrrl
This is actually pretty cool. The horse looks great. But there's some odd lens distortion going on here. The perspective is off somehow. I'm not sure which if Poser's cameras you used, some of them have really really odd focals by default. But all in all it's a good pic. And it's nice to see Judy without her looking like an alien :)
cyanure
The horse look great,seem the old P4Horse is still able to kick around,may be using a mix of displacement and bump could soften a little the textures for the horse,else well except for the small perspective problems,thats a great picture,but thats not a pose I personnaly wish to try on a horse!!,nice picture,well done!
dasquid
That's a nice pose though it looks like she might be leaning a bit to the viewer's side of the horse and may fall off if the horse moves suddenly.
drifterlee
Turned out beautiful Dave!!!
fls13
I remapped the P4 horse myself, it really needed it, and it gets the job done. You might say it's a real workhorse. :O)
erlandpil
Very nice picture erland
densa
excellent scene
Faery_Light
I like this texture on the horse better than the previous one. Backgound is fantastic. Only postwork tip I can off is to try and do a bit of hair painting so some of her hair falls downward a bit.
M2A
Except the "squezzed" effect noticed by members above, your image is really good job. The scene with the horse is pleasant.
kobaltkween
i think pretty much everything that needs improvement has been covered. i will say that if she's interested in the feeling of a horse between her thighs, she's in the wrong position. the muscles that move when the horse does are the back and shoulders, not the neck. and riding bareback and upright, she'd have to be squeezing pretty tight with her thighs. laying back like that, well, her thighs wouldn't help her balance much. they'd just allow her to swing around on the horse's neck, which wouldn't be much fun for either of them, i think. oh, and an overcast sky means pretty much no shadow and lots of white ambient light. i'm wondering how you're handling the mane? the tail looks pretty good, which i think says a lot about what's not necessary in hair objects. the remap does look even better here. it's probably me, but i think the horse looks shinier than in the last pic, which is good. i like the colors together, too. great work!
Butchr
Great job David - I dont have to critique cause you've already had enough of that - I'm sure rg is proud of this . . . Butch