Buried Bones by vaggabondd

Writers • Realism • posted on Feb 12, 2009

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I had a dream last night I was in a field The sun was shinning It felt good on my face I could tell I was all alone There was a shovel Laying in the tall grass I started digging After a foot or so I started finding little bones I realized these were my bones Little pieces of me That had died along the way The deeper I dug The bigger and more hideous The bones became The colder it got I could no longer feel the sun Touching my face Soon it dawned on me There was no end to this hole There was no light At the end of this tunnel Then I scurried out of the hole Laid on my bed Trembling with fear I pray I never have to dig There again

Comments (9)

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3x3

1:56PM | Thu, 12 February 2009

lovely written!

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Syltermermaid

2:48PM | Thu, 12 February 2009

Wonderful but also very dark poem!!!! Excellent Randy!! Hugs Ute

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flaviok

3:49PM | Thu, 12 February 2009

Belo poema, intricico em si mesmo, aplausos (5)

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beachzz

10:32PM | Thu, 12 February 2009

wow, that's a bit scary; good writing!!

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auntietk

11:33PM | Thu, 12 February 2009

This is absolutely phenomenal. My jaw is on the floor. Excellent work!

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brycek

3:37AM | Fri, 13 February 2009

Fantastic poem!!

Wolfspirit

3:09PM | Fri, 13 February 2009

Hey Randy, I love dreams, nightmares too, they all tell a story, perfect. As a writer, I've learned a lot from my dreaming mind. How brilliant it is, "The Mind" Given the opportunity, it makes no mistakes…It writes a best seller every time. Thanks Randy. Keep writing, rock on my friend!

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