Guppy in Storage by nicodemia
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Description
This was my first attempt at using a 3D program. I need all you guys to be as critical as possible so I can improve. Cheers.
Comments (5)
polimorfer
Very cool textures and lighting, the dirty effect is very impressive. Perhaps you need to use a additional light in the scene. Congrats for you first attempt with Cinema 4D. Cheers
Erik0815Erik
hard to believe that it's your first 3-D-attempt ... however, I trie to give you advices :-) the mainproblem is allways to get what you want - to get some nice results with playing around is not so hard, to get nice effects by trying something special is also not so hard, so ... is that what you've got that what you did want to get? If so, there are no more advices, it's good ... if you played around and got this, I could say that the rust/chrome-shader is to big, you should set it on 2 or 3 in the materialeditor and/or try the cube-mapping --- for the backside wall I would say you should increase the bump-high, try it with 500% and Anit1 as interpolation, or mip ... if it dont work as you want you can also use the same bump-map for the displacement-channel, but then you must give the object (I think it's a cube, if it's a floor-object you should use a cube) much nodes (each direction 100 for example) - than you should use 2 or 3 lights; one from right behid the camera, one from opposite and one from the back (find outkl wich lightsettings fit together - it's allways else :-) ... hmmm ... the head is not very round, whatever you've used for it, give it more nodes (before modeling) or try to put it in a hypernurbsobject (after) or try a smooth-tag ... so, there's nothing more to say, you're good, keep on :-) (first attempt, I don't believe it, who's out there? :-)
Nod
Very nice. Nice textures. Could do with a brighter, or extra light though.
psychodan
Tips? Uhh.. Lemmie try...
1-Stop making everyone else look bad by that being your first attempt
2-Listen to that Erik Guy, He's smart.
3-Make it in 1024x768 or something os I can have a new desktop picture. :)
nicodemia
cheers guys. Ive been working on the model some more since and im hoping to post a revised version soon.