Flat Chat 3/6 by MrGorf
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Marty... You silly boy!
I am disappointed with this page because it's a prime example of really bad layout. Anytime there are arrows you just know something isn't right. The truth is that I had a hard time making it all fit together. I was contemplating extending the third frame all the way to the right, making the flow more obvious, but that would leave a nontrivial wedge of the picture completely empty. Oh well!
Comments (4)
thecytron
Xcellent cartoon strip!
Rainbowgirl
I can see the difficulties in composing a cartoon page. Tried it only once and gloriously failed lol But you shouldn't be too harsh with yourself. This here would perfectly do without arrows imho. As for the story, I'm more and more curious about the end and I think the girl looks sexy ;-)
ragouc
Very good cartoon. Well done.
AngelsInc
I think the flow is great! left to right ....I was oblivious to the arrows till you mentioned them in the comment :) this story is hilarious and compelling!