wind followed me by AndreiR
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Description
This morning I took a walk, but I forgot my camera. And even if I had my camera with me, it was so cold that I wouldn't use it. So I wrote this poem instead.
Have a great day!
* * *
Wind followed me along the edges
Of the semi-frozen pond
Ducks
Noisy seagulls were disturbing slightly
This otherwise silent place
Three dead fish
Quite big – about twenty inches long
I noticed them on the grass
They were frozen too
Like everything else
That didn't manage to live
In this cold and windy morning
Comments (7)
hipps13
writers gallery for a thought nice poem and I bet you froze
M2A
So lovely words. Wind is a whisper that likes to play with the Cold, but only us are the eternal children :-)
flavia49
nice poem!
sandra46
A great poem! you managed to paint a still life scene with your words. Thank you!
bmac62
You've provided a vivid description. I feel I've been right along with you seeing all the same sights. I've just begun to come to the Writer's Gallery myself after lots of time in the Photography Gallery. I'll look for more:)
beachzz
Sometimes you just take a picture with your mind and we can still see what you saw--you did this beautifully!!
auntietk
This is such a wonderful description, and I can see in my mind's eye how you would photograph the scene. Light streams in from an unexpected angle, highlighting exactly what you want us to see ... the fish a bit disturbing, but beautiful nevertheless. I hope to see more of your writing ... this is wonderful work!