Spring Run ( Looking for suggestions) by rawdodb

Carrara/RDS • Animals • posted on Mar 16, 2009

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Looking for comments and suggestions on improving... Thanks CRWR Mane & Tails and Painted ponies

Comments (14)

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Darkwish

9:43AM | Mon, 16 March 2009

Great work! Very well done!

shipmanjonathan

9:58AM | Mon, 16 March 2009

Fabulous!! I like it!

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furuta

10:28AM | Mon, 16 March 2009

Beautiful and happy image. wonderful work!!

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Flint_Hawk

11:33AM | Mon, 16 March 2009

You've done a great job! You might want to check the foal's mane though,it goes too far down the back.

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stevey3d

3:55PM | Mon, 16 March 2009

Looks excellent as it is! Wonderful colour and composition. Another approach would be more trees on either side and a castle in the distance visible through the trees.

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sglfx

4:59PM | Mon, 16 March 2009

This could be a book cover: Title up there in the sky authors name down in the grass. As above if you want less fantasy maybe a barn? -we could add things all day, it's knowing when to stop :)

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tryky5carla

5:15PM | Mon, 16 March 2009

Beautiful ponies ! Excellent scene, wonderful colours and composition ! 5 +++++++++

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bkhook

7:46PM | Mon, 16 March 2009

I love this... Appies......Beautiful scene.

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jif3d

8:16PM | Mon, 16 March 2009

O.K., nice composition and mix of mediums ! IMHO...the foal's mane & tail textures are missing, the horses poses seem more like, as if they are stopping, rather than running through the meadows, the only other thing I would have worked on, is that the foreground grass looks very saturated compared to the photo and I would have toned it down, these are only minor problems and I'm sure you will nail it next time ! Well done & ~Cheers~

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giareg

6:38AM | Tue, 17 March 2009

Very beautiful!!

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gaius

12:04PM | Tue, 17 March 2009

It reminds me of one of the most beautiful show in my life : a herd of mustangs (almost 100 of them ) in Nevada, near Tonopah, by sunset...the stallions fighting...OK ! it was in the desert, no grass, no flowers, just sand and dust...Anyway many thanks for making me think of it with this beautiful image which evokes Colorado ? North Utah ? Montana ? Just beautiful. Do you really want us to express some reservations, to give an advice ? The foal's mane is maybe a bit too "sharp", but frankly it's a detail compare to the quality of your creation.

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johnny_damnit

4:44PM | Tue, 17 March 2009

Beautiful scene!! Everything is great the only thing I may change would be the foals pose. The two horses poses are very similar. Other than that I would not change a thing. Very nice work my friend!

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