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One Last Dance

Writers Surrealism posted on Mar 23, 2009
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As the music comes to an end In that moment of silence When we know This is the last dance We will ever have together I think back on everything You have meant to me We are souls in this great big universe That somehow was able to connect You introduced me to music That touched my heart And swayed my thoughts The gentleness of your touch And the softness of your way Made me dream dreams I still think of you When I look out my window And see the big dipper But this circle Has made its way around Come to an end And my life will forever Be better Because you entered into it As always if you think this poem is for you. Than you are right, this one is for you

Comments (9)


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flaviok

2:22PM | Mon, 23 March 2009

Poema magnifico meu amigo, colocação final verdadeira, aplausos (5)

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BlackWidow77

2:25PM | Mon, 23 March 2009

God, your words are so beautiful...they touch my heart.

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brycek

2:29PM | Mon, 23 March 2009

Lovely poem!!

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schonee

8:41PM | Mon, 23 March 2009

I really Love this one Randy!

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beachzz

8:50PM | Mon, 23 March 2009

I think we all have someone who touched us this way~~beautiful thoughts, Randy!!

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Merrylee

12:07AM | Tue, 24 March 2009

Bravo Randy...good poem

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hipps13

11:59AM | Tue, 24 March 2009

funny how memories can be in color wonderful work warm hug, Linda

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Syltermermaid

1:45PM | Tue, 24 March 2009

A wonderful and very sentimental poem!!!! Marvelous my friend!! Hugs Ute

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auntietk

8:37PM | Tue, 24 March 2009

This is beautifully done, Randy. The feel of the thing is so poignant, and that in and of itself makes this a wonderful piece. Going back and reading it again, I got pulled into the way you crafted the poem, saying this thing here instead of there ... the way it flows ... excellent!


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