Excellent work!!

excellent!

Fantastic scene!

Very cool work. Love how you did this. Fabulous character and cool attire. Wonderful!!!

Great POV and lighting :)

The background is very static but the figure still manages to almost get lost in it. The tug of the eye to the figure is based more on the fact of her unusual apparel and bare skin rather than a dynamic pose or expression. Since her face is mostly hidden by the viewpoint/headgear something else needs to draw the eye in. It's like one of those "good" photographs taken by a talented photography student. Well framed, focused, and developed but lacking that spark of "WOW!" which smacks you upside the head and makes your jaw drop to the floor. Bring some of that passion you have for the female form to your backgrounds. Feels like you turned down the intensity of the character here to better fit a static background and lost her in the process. Turn up your backgrounds. Have them excite the eye to your center of interest. Maybe experimenting with different versions of the scene would help ( e.g. the character as a prop for the background ). Doing the opposite of what you intend might through contrast give you a better feel for it. Also, she's too clean. Even if she is a mech angel/demoness that just flew in to make repairs, the place is a wreck. Dirt is sexy. Give her a few smudges or a clothing tear. It will help integrate her with the scene and add interest. "Hmm, I wonder how she got that rip/smudge/cut/burn there?" What can I say. I like my angels sullied. :) Anyway, awesome to see you branching out and trying different stuff. O.

Superb!

Yah, this is a cool scene - wish I could afford all of DM's work :-)

Fantastic scene and character!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!