Processing Data 3
by Faemike55
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While Sarina and Corinda were talking, Seneel woke up and started pacing about. suddenly he took off through the forest with Corinda and Sarina right after him!
Corinda(yelling): Seneel! Seneel! Slow down, will you? Sarina? Can you see him?
Sarina (in the air): I just saw him turn towards another glen, at least I think that's where he's going.
Corinda: Seneeeeeel!!!! come back here, please?
A wail tinged with extreme agony and frustration floats through the woods, stopping Corinda in her tracks.
Corinda (putting her hands over her ears): Sarina! what the heck was that?
Sarina (fluttering down to the ground next to Corinda): I'm not sure, it sounded like a scream, but unlike anything I've ever heard.
They finally find Seneel crouching near Telmah whose wings are almost in the ground. her eyes are shifting colours as she thrashes around.
Corinda (kneeling by Telmah): Telmah! Telmah! Look at me! Talk to me, please!
Sarina gently flutters down next to Telmah right side: Come on, Telmah! Sit up, please!
Telmah sits up and looks wildly around: reboot complete, paradigm rewritten to accept magic as real and viable. Corinda? Sarina? Seneel? What are you doing here?
Seneel rumbles looking intently at Telmah.
Corinda: Seneel must have heard you and came looking for you. Are you okay now?
Telmah: Yes, thank you! There was so much that I experienced. (looking intently at Corinda) how did you do it? That was unnerving, if I understand the term correctly.
Corinda: It was unnerving to me as well, but I think because my mind was not pre-programmed like yours, I was able to accept the changes and concepts a bit better. How many colours did you see, Telmah?
Sarina: I'm curious to know as well.
Telmah: I felt over two million colours and maybe more, from infared to beyond ultra-violet. I mean, I could see that entire range but I never felt them before. It was totally unique. I now understand what feeling is about... even caring.
Sarina: What about your old programming, isn't it still there?
Telmah: Actually, it is not there anymore. While rewriting the paradigms, I managed to rewrite some of the old program and eliminate other parts.
Corinda: What parts did you eliminate?
Telmah: the parts that would make me hurt you and others of Fae Valley. I rewrote what I could so I would protect rather than destroy. (turning to Sarina) I must meet with the elders and teachers so I can learn how to use this new knowledge! please help me, Sarina! Please?
Sarina (softly): I will, Telmah. You and Corinda will be taught by the best that Fae Valley has to offer.
Seneel rumbling lowly
Corinda (laughing): Of course, Seneel. I'm sure that Telmah is going to be okay. I think we all need to get back to our home and get some rest. Even though you're an android, I'm sure that you could use some rest as well.
Telmah: Thank you Corinda! I think I could do with some rest. It's been a long day!
Sarina: yes it has for all of us. I agree, let's go home.
The get up from the glen floor and head towards home.
Thank you all for your patience while I worked this dialogue!
I hope everyone has a great friday and a wonderful weekend
Mike
Comments (49)
shadownet
Nice job on this Mike.
Iceshark39
Fantastic work, Mike! Well worth the wait! Great dialogue and a great image. I'm looking forward to see what happens next!
FutureFantasyDesign
What expressive and animated conversation! Definite +++! Hugs Ariana
renecyberdoc
i saw a deep message here in the last lines,rewrite to protect rather than destroy,our scripts need a rewriting/revising too. to give instead to take to love instead to hate to play instead to fight. as i commented already this morning to magikunicorn.if humanity would not have mutated to "idiots"-sorry to say that,then it would be easier to go down on the basics and the roots of the problems. you did great my friend.
three_grrr
I tend to forget that Seneel is still just a baby, and expected to see a BIG dragon, LOL! Wonderful scene, and fantastic dialogue!
joaq
Wow! Excellent Mike, wonderful story and fantastic composition!Bravo!
Igolochka
You write such a cool story, very nice illustration to it! Great work on poses and expressions!
mikeerson
Mike, you told me you don't know what catagory to put yourstuff under - maybe it should be writing? You always have a ton of words to spit out... unfortuneatly for me, I have limited time to view the galleries and comment... I for one would love if you had two versons of the story, the long - and say all that you want and the short, for us people that get up a 5:30 and are looking at your gallery at 12:50am - lol It's dark in your picture, I think it is past their bedtime too - lol
Darkwish
Nice, very nice pic!
lyron
Fantastic work!!
mininessie
great work in all ways Mike ...you need to make a book with this :D hugs!!
capelito
Beautiful scene.
adrie
Wonderful composition and story my friend, excellent done love it.
UteBigSmile
Hi Mike, what a nice image, I love your Telmah a lot because it/she is blue! Your will get your Girl-Part2 this evening - Lol! Hug's Ute
AGentleMuse
Lovely scene and story telling!!
alKhall
Beaut scene and the story is moving along nicely Mike.. :0)
Rainastorm
Have to say Mike your story lines are as awesome as your posts...great job my friend. :-)
schonee
Well Mike this is some story my friend. Alway look forward to them. Great job on the scene & story!
allnaydi
Wonderful dialogue and scene Mike. Fae Valley is evolving beautifully.
magnus073
Wonderful scene Mike and you did a great job on the dialogue also. Have a wonderufl weekend.
sazzart
Great well constructed (modeled) design, and storyline - well worth the anticipation. I would look at lighting up the scene and softening the shadows a tad; but that's me.
pops
This is pretty cool Mike
Cimaira
Fantastic work, the story just keeps getting better and better. Excellent illustration to go with it.
beatoangelico
love the scene...superb render...excellent art..!!!
Amosicho
Fantastic work
dianas..creations
Fantastic! Well worth waiting for, and looking forward to what happens next..:)
ladyinblack
Your story is just wonderful Mike... great job on this episode. Great image too... poses, expressions, lighting and atmosphere. Terrific work :)
brycek
Terrific work Mike!!
MagikUnicorn
E X C E L L E N T
BenBischop
Dark Art....;)