The Storm by Alealonna

2D • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Apr 07, 2009

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I painted this a few months ago. I decided to post it because I had a very strange dream the other day that I was in the world of my painting... although it wasn't raining in my dream. The sky was gray and cloudy. Anyways, I wrote a poem that goes along with it. I fall within depths of my mind Leaves fall, frozen still in time A soft melody growing stronger Powerful stare lasting longer Silence thunders Autumn's sky Turned violent white in wistful sigh Twisting, turning, lovers' dance Develop into hateful trance Puppets move upon the wire Walking paths of your desire Melody, lonely and haunting Crying out in so much wanting Building, growing, learning, trusting Dreaming, falling, crying, lusting Skies darken, rain comes down Watching as you turn around Go ahead and walk away I still can't think of words to say Jess

Comments (8)

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Faemike55

12:01AM | Wed, 08 April 2009

WOW! interesting and moving words and image! Well done, Jess

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barryjeffer

3:39AM | Wed, 08 April 2009

A very outstanding painting and the poem is excellent, filled with pure, raw emotion... love it. seth

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anaber

7:08AM | Wed, 08 April 2009

This is very beautiful,Jess.You dreamed, perhaps because it looks like a dream..The atmosphere is dark but shines all around!and everything becomes luminous.The rain looks like shooting stars and inside the house i see the lights:someone is there!Life is there.Your poem is wonderful like your painting too.So beautiful.Congratulations.My fav.

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Iceshark39

10:52PM | Thu, 09 April 2009

Fantastic painting and stunning words. Beautifully paired.

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anahata.c

1:51AM | Fri, 10 April 2009

well I join one of our best 2D artists, Ana, in faving this too. The poem, about encounters in dreams, moves sinuously to the presence of a person; and you seem to be seeing all you can't 'say' to that person, the dance is all in your inner eye & heart. And, with Ana, I see illumination in your raindrops, in your dark blues, in the blues of the outer wall of the house, and in the lights inside the house (yes, someone is in there). Would love to see some of these paintings large-size...Nice to see painting from you from time to time, I hope you continue. There is light inside your work, that's for sure...

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shadownet

3:35AM | Fri, 17 April 2009

Beautiful artwork but I like your prose in particular. As I go through your gallery and read your comments, I find you fascinate me with your thoughts. It is good to find someone who thinks and can express those thoughts in a good way.

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Minuano

12:12PM | Wed, 08 July 2009

works like these always remind me about the beautiful intensity of the artistic mind. I like stepping out after a big cleansing rain ... The whole world seemed to smell sweet. I'm glad I stubled on this cool heartfelt piece. A beauty. -Julian

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