Day's End by auntietk
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Day's End
My day began
With you
First thing this morning
I called your name
And you were there
Talking me into the world
Letting me wake up slow
Easing me into my day
Gentle and warm
Soft and low
You got me out the door
With coffee and a kiss
Sent me on my way
Feeling happy and whole
And when my day was done
Things slowed down
Sunset and nightfall
Pulling back in
You were there
To hold my hand
And bring me peace
To talk me down
Gather me in
You sent me to bed
With love and a kiss
And a promise for tomorrow
My day ended
With you
..........
Title page created in ArtRage and Photoshop
Font is Dolmen
Comments (21)
JaneEden
Oh this is really so beautiful, I love it. Very well done to you, hugs Jane xx
Faemike55
Very beautiful!
Rainastorm
Beautiful poem:-)
beachzz
smile I know about these kinds of things; nothing sweeter.
anahata.c
perfection & beauty. You couldn't have said it better. It's beautiful! (And I don't know if you even thought about it, because you write with genuine intuition, but there's beautiful symmetry in your poem: It begins & ends with two lines, even same # of syllables, which is gently harmonious. And then you have 3 lines, 5 lines, 4 lines, then their reverse...then back to the lovely ending. I'm not being technical, because we really 'feel' these things; we feel them the way we sense harmony in the petals of a flower, where each one is different from each other, but so much alike. Your harmonies are present the way they are in your beautiful images.) This is beautiful; I hope everyone has people in their lives like this!
lizzibell
very nice work..
CaressingTheDark
I love this
bmac62
There is a wholeness, a completeness here in your poem. Silly as this comparison sounds, I have a huge leather recliner...big enough that two people can squeeze into it. It is perfect for a grandfather and a grandson to read in:) Or for me to sit in and bring my 20 pound dog up into until she wants back down to flop full-out on the carpet. When no chores are lurking, there is a completeness here too. The only thing my chair can't do is give me a kiss or make me a cup of coffee:) But there is a sense of comfort here...one that can be wallowed in and enjoyed. That's the sense I get of your feeling in your poem. Am I close? I'm laughing a bit here. I typically never use the word wallow. But earlier today I was reading some ole time description of my hometown of Leavenworth here. In the mid-19th century, Leavenworth was the shipping portal for the westward expansion of the frontier. Drovers, wagon trains, horses, and oxen were everywhere. There was an ox wallow right down town. A place where oxen could relax (wallow) after pulling a wagon in from St. Louis or from a return trip from Santa Fe or Denver. If this entire comment sounds a little spacey...it probably is...but I'm going to send it anyway and hope you enjoy the ramble with me. ...As I've enjoyed going through experiencing your day with you. Well done my friend.
helanker
Such a beautiful poem Tara. You are so darn good at this too.
durleybeachbum
Well I love your poem, and I loved reading Bill's comment just as much!
busi2ness
You paint such a cozy atmosphere with words, very well done!
sandra46
fabulous poem!
Kownacki78
What a beautiful poem! I love it!
flavia49
great poem!!
hipps13
beautiful work, Tara May warm hug that smiles, Linda Kaye
lucindawind
marvellous !
Merrylee
You brought tears to my eyes Tara...My Night in Shining Armor rode away from me and never gave me a reason why...Yes Roger...So once again I'm going threw tough times.
Katraz
Lovely Poem.
anaber
Well,i love your poem and Bill´s comment.
faroutsider
This is writing of the highest order - clear, concise, sincere and beautiful. For me, wallowing in Bill's sofa captures the essence, but not the depth of your words...
ontar1
Beautiful poem, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!