A day for you and I by s_roby1990
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Description
I haven't posted anything for a while but I finnaly wrote a new song and I would like to hear some feedback on it :) ... Any type of coments are welcome. I wrote this song for a girl I started falling in love with that lives far from me and soon she will be leaving... Ohh and english is not my first language so please feel free to correct my spelling.
A day for you and I
In our moments together I felt more alive
Since the night that i met you my soul came to life
The smell of sweet jasmine reminds me of you
Getting lost in your eyes didn't know what to do
Since that night we first kissed i've been thinking a lot
Knowing soon you'll be gone, I'll be here while you're not
Put on foot in heaven beginning to pray
I'd turn back the clock, how I wish you could stay
chorus:
It's never a game but it's never quite real
There's no one to blame for the wounds that won't heal
And time keeps on mooving, the distance is growing
I'll never again have you here by my side
will there ever again be a day for you and I ?
Is it to late to give you my heart
When thousands of myles will keep us appart?
If you ever feel lonely, if you ever feel sad
Just smile and remember the good times we had
Remember the sunrise we first saw together
The cold night before how we waited forever
But that's all behind us, the future's our friend
I'll allways keep hoping that this is not the end.
Comments (2)
Fidelity2
Let it all out. 5+.
elfin12u
Wonderfully written and heartfelt!!! I wonder sometimes why it is that we seem to be at our most romantic, at the end of a relationship. I'd put to paper more poems that way ( and I know I'm not alone ), and realize now, that if I had put half that effort in, while with her, I probably never would have felt compelled to write the sad ones!!