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A day for you and I

Writers Romance posted on May 14, 2009
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I haven't posted anything for a while but I finnaly wrote a new song and I would like to hear some feedback on it :) ... Any type of coments are welcome. I wrote this song for a girl I started falling in love with that lives far from me and soon she will be leaving... Ohh and english is not my first language so please feel free to correct my spelling. A day for you and I In our moments together I felt more alive Since the night that i met you my soul came to life The smell of sweet jasmine reminds me of you Getting lost in your eyes didn't know what to do Since that night we first kissed i've been thinking a lot Knowing soon you'll be gone, I'll be here while you're not Put on foot in heaven beginning to pray I'd turn back the clock, how I wish you could stay chorus: It's never a game but it's never quite real There's no one to blame for the wounds that won't heal And time keeps on mooving, the distance is growing I'll never again have you here by my side will there ever again be a day for you and I ? Is it to late to give you my heart When thousands of myles will keep us appart? If you ever feel lonely, if you ever feel sad Just smile and remember the good times we had Remember the sunrise we first saw together The cold night before how we waited forever But that's all behind us, the future's our friend I'll allways keep hoping that this is not the end.

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Fidelity2

10:44AM | Thu, 14 May 2009

Let it all out. 5+.

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elfin12u

7:10PM | Thu, 14 May 2009

Wonderfully written and heartfelt!!! I wonder sometimes why it is that we seem to be at our most romantic, at the end of a relationship. I'd put to paper more poems that way ( and I know I'm not alone ), and realize now, that if I had put half that effort in, while with her, I probably never would have felt compelled to write the sad ones!!


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