**Famished** by lorddarkwolf
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“Famished”
©2009 NGN
"An interesting proposition." She said in response to the mortals’ bold request, a sultry smile fixed in place rendering her irresistible, fangs concealed so as not to frighten him prematurely. That would spoil the fun. "Yes, why don't we? I'm famished." A spark of amusement in her night dark eyes at her own pun. Her prey smiled with her hesitantly, not getting the joke. He had no idea who or what she was only that he wanted her with a passion he'd never known.
She slid a cool finger down the warm expanse of his throat, sending chilblains down his spine. His mouth went dry as a desert.
"Would you like to go somewhere more private?" She inquired softly, finger working its way under his collar, popping button after button with ease.
Not wanting to appear too eager, he murmured his assent in a fashion he hoped would make her think him smooth and sexy. She knew his thoughts and repressed a laugh. It was so easy... too easy. She almost reconsidered, preferring more of a challenge. But he did have a few redeeming qualities. He was pretty and charming, if a bit vapid. He'd be worth a few nights at least.
"I know just the place." Taking him by the hand, she drew him out into the darkness towards one of her favourite spots. He was a tad unnerved by her choice. Nervous laughter issued from him.
"A cemetery? How Goth of you."
The pretense was easy too. She let him think he was witty with a light laugh and a smile, drawing him into the place, leading him to one of the crypts she'd broken into. She called it Cold Storage, a place to keep them when she meant to make a meal last more than a night.
"Okay." He said with a wry grin, allowing her to escort him inside, putting his hands on her immediately. "This turn you on? I can dig it baby."
Already taking liberties, well, that was just fine. Let him have a little fun, after all, this would be the last night he'd be able to enjoy anything, really.
The thirst ate at her insides, making her impatient. Time to take the matter and the mortal in hand...
She fed well on him and despite the fact he put up little fight, the rich meaty broth in his veins made him worth it she thought. Leaving him sprawled on the floor of the chamber looking for all the world like a spilled bowl of red Jell-O, she shut the door tightly after herself, sealing him in. He could scream his throat raw and never be heard, the area in which the crypt lay long since abandoned by the living.
She returned the second night to find him bloody, battered for his efforts to escape and exhausted. This time he fought albeit weakly. A day without food and water is nothing to those accustomed to going without but for these soft modern mortals, it was tantamount to a catastrophe. Again, she fed, enjoying this second meal more than the first and again left him unconscious on the floor.
On the third night before she even reached the cemetery gates she knew the party was over. Fragile thing, he had expired.
"Damn." She cursed softly to herself, "How I loathe going hungry."
*story by my Fiance`*
Comments (34)
mgtcs
Excellent render, amazing mood, Congratulations.
kaleya Online Now!
This is just awesome! Great story and I love the image it is perfect!
Rainastorm
Great story AND render!!
adiemas
Excellent!
tamburro
Great work and story!!!! +++5!!!!
45Cool
Amazing story and beautiful image!!!!!!
Dragonluna1
Bloody excellent story and pic!!! Bravo!!!
DarkStormCrow
Excellent!
Pankaj
WOW !!!! What a story and Image!!!! I'm not really a horror fan , but this is really good!
shotgung0d
Awesome work from both of you!
Cimaira
Fantastic, I love the image, just the right atmosphere and beautiful lady. The story is just as wonderful. Excellent colloration!
lunchlady
Awesome!!!!
brycek
Fantastic image and story..well done!!
ESarge
Superb image and story!! Very well done on both!
Faemike55
Wonderful stoy and great render
magnus073
Lenn this one is SO COOL and I can't get over how you set the mood so perfectly in both the image and your words
pops
What a spooky atmosphere and wonderful story-well done
Darkwish
Cool work! I like this pic!
crender
so awesome job!!
zil2008
Bloody excellent. Image and story. Gave me the creeps.
ThomasMacCallum
Awesome render and a very well written tale Excellent.
MtnMist
Fantastic mood setting and excellent render!
Niha
The pair of you work well together! Nice work! Great image and story!
schonee
Well done I love the story and the image, Great mood...I was hoping on the third night she came back to find him turned ; ) Fave for sure!
delbeke
Wonderfullly done atmosphere and composition, great lighting
carlx
Fantastic character, lighting and atmosphere!!!
callad
I once had a relation with such a girl.. she made me bleed for more than twelve years before she left me to rot.. ^_~ Excellent work on the image AND words!
2121
wonderful words and spectacular render
dbrv6
Great story and image. Well done with the atmosphere with the lights and fog near the floor.
theprojectionist
She looks Awesome Dude,off too dl DAZ 3