Chapter 11: A choice by mininessie
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Chapter 11: A choice
Ilona : thanks Eric…it´s an honor for me that you had confide me your history…I need a favour from you….
Erik: ¿a favour?...i don´t sure…..
Ilona : ¿can i live here while I write my book?
Erik: you…do you want to live here?..here with me? –says Erik even more surprised-
-Ilona look at Erik…and smile when she sees the surprised face of Erik-
Ilona: ¿why not? –still smiling-
Erik: because …well…you…i´m not a good company…too much time alone…in the darkness…and …even if you don´t say it…I know i´m not a nice view.
Ilona: oh! –with a wicked sight- you are right ..you are not a nice view..¿do you know why?
Erik: -confused- I….
Ilona: shhhhhhhhhh!!! Is not for your ugliness…you are not ugly for me!
But please …stop to self commiserate…this is worst for me than your scars!
-Erik needs to stop for understand her words..his mind is overflowed for all the things that are happening…but Ilona continue talking-
Erik..please…-say Ilona with a more sweet tone-I need you understand me…i´m not Christine….i believe in you…..but if you don’t´
Believe in yourself ,I can do nothing…you are a very old and wise man –how you still live and seems to be young ,I don´t know.-..i understand you suffered
Too much….but you still can have a try..but is your choice!
Eric: - very tired- i need to rest..i´m very confused …I have to think…I…-and Erik fall asleep-
-Ilona look at him,asleep he looks even more fragile,Ilona just imagine how much he must have suffered
for so many years alone and without consolation but his music and his innocence- "nobody should go through this," Ilona thinks….but she is glad to have him as close..he still have to choose..but she just made her own choice..don´t let him to be alone never more!
Comments (20)
Amosicho
Fantastic work
mininessie
thanks so much Darek!! :D
Gisela
Muy bien.!!
adrie
Wonderful composition and work Ines.....excellent done.
mininessie
aww...gracias hada :D besos! thanks so much adrie :D hugs to you!!
magnus073
Ines this is such a beautiful story and made me feel so happy. It is a great image and perfect to celebrate your 200th
mininessie
WOW!! 200 ...i don´t noticed before :D thanks Dave...i´m really happy you enjoy it !!!
Cimaira
Excellent story and wonderful pov
mininessie
thank so much Cimaira :D
Faemike55
Excellent work! Happy 200!!!
mininessie
thanks Mike :D
anmes
Wonderful work again
mininessie
thanks...thanks you so much!! :D
Zazou
Excellent story and perfect illustration !
mininessie
oh! thanks ..you made me really happy!
mgtcs
Fantastic..very well done my friend!
mininessie
aww...thanks you so much :D
PSDuck
Well, she could have chosen worse: he could be a frog during the day. ;D
DennisReed
Hmmmmmmmmmmm, I'm begining to think you might be Ilona? ;) Wonderful story & imagination
mininessie
ha ha ha! ...the frog is from another tale lol!!! Dennis...i think i have a bit of Ilona and a bit of Erik....i have both feelings...really i´m not a writer , you can see it!...i only express my feelings trough the story thanks you so much for the coments!:D