Wanna race ....... ? by dbat

Critique • Portraits • posted on Jul 13, 2009

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Description

First attempt with Daz 3 after using POSER 'til now. Many thanks to Fober1 for the amazing Foberghini -- and it's free ! PS think I might have been slightly influenced by Transformers looking back ....

Production Credits

Aaliyah Hair

By outoftouch

$16.95 USD

Comments (15)

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sontaeseok

3:49AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

i love this art skin fill of material want to touch her skin~~~~i'm sorrymy mean grat work~~~~^^thanks for excellent art!!!!!!

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DavyJo

3:58AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Wonderful Character, pose and composition +5

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PeterN64

4:00AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Great compo. Well done !

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bazza

4:02AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Great work.. Lovely car and lady.. Super work!!5++

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Skullhead63

4:04AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Beautiful work!

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ragouc

5:05AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Good work. Well done.

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thecytron

8:25AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Nicely put together!

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45Cool

10:15AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Beautiful work!!!! Outstanding detail, lighting and atmo!!!! Fave!!!!

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elfguy

11:03AM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Nice looking outfit!

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jakiesnannie

2:07PM | Mon, 13 July 2009

Beautifully realistic. Great lighting and shadow work. The pose is hot and sexy...excellent render.

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Rainbowgirl

3:19AM | Tue, 14 July 2009

Perfect skin, perfect light, perfect pose! Brilliant!

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Daidalos

12:20AM | Mon, 27 July 2009

Hi there dbat. All in all it's an ok image. The composition is fine, so is the girl. The only thing I can see that I would say could use some more work, is the mats on the car. If it is possible, I would suggest adding a bit more reflectivity to the body of the car so you can see a slight reflection of the girl, (this can be done in post work too by the way), and the glass on the windshield and headlights look a little "plastic" to me. Again other than that great image. Thanks for sharing it with us. D.

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cvrad

4:10PM | Sat, 01 August 2009

excellent first attempt fro just begiing a new program! Agree with Daidalos also the car looks like it might be intesecting the fence in the back! also giving her a diffrent color top with have added some contrast to her hair and not made her blend into the fence so much!

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santicor

8:56PM | Sat, 14 November 2009

She's too big for the car - that's gotta be a V base fig. Scale her down quite a bit - its not your fault its that damn extra long torso. I am looking at the 2 coments previous to mine and its funny i had the exact dsmae problem lighting a highly shined electric guitar - i got the reflectivity on a certain soide of the guitar just right - ( like you have on the driver froint fender) but no matter what I did i could not duplicate on the oither faces of the guitar - see how the ood of the car is a little flatter - BTW did you create an image plane to bounce a reflection off of that hood? if not, you should. cause an image plane is good. I certainly would . If I made a car hood.

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