In Place Of Real by hipps13
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Description
Tendencies
Bumbles a time tore free
Tied in knots that bound
Grasps become anything
As the walls seem too close
Now a prison feels the scars
That tend to sense believe
Strokes swept a tear
Wept the blanket held
Alive inside the craves
The sunshine it once withheld
As motions tend to weave
Intertwine uncertainty
Folded Blanket symbol
Replaces the hand of real
Wraps a cold warm jingle
Bundles a tender softness
Vanishes the darks that breaks
That crumbles out aware
Freedom to express allow
Wept the blanket kept
©28 July 2009 LKS
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Thank YOU
very much appreciated
Comments (29)
Vizronze
Wowewowa! That`s what i call a masterpiece! Abstract, creates an image in the mind wich mixes fantasy, with the impression of being awestruck! Wonderfull words to, wich melts tenderly with the image!
MagikUnicorn
B E A U T I F U L
Star4mation
Wonderful abstract terrain Linda :)
Miska7
Very nice scene. Great terrain and lighting! Really well done.
lyron
Great image!!
Mousson
Très belles image !!!
rocserum
impressive work, outstanding result! RS
OrphanedSoul
A nice one!
auntietk
Love the light in your image, and the third stanza in your poem. Those two things really jumped out at me. Beautiful work as always, my dear!
anaber
Wonderful image!The light is wonderful and the atmosphere is misterious all around.
mgtcs
Excellent textures and beautiful view!
3x3
wonderfully composed Lin x f!
TallPockets
LOVELY scene and writings, Hipps! SCARS are HEALED wounds, no longer OPEN. My BEST to you and yours, KIND SOUL. T.P./brian.
B_PEACOCK
Beautiful work Lin Love you
Erynn
Wonderful work :) Sorry for beeing not around here that much.. I had a lot to do, but now I'm back :) hugs
KarmaSong
I like the way you use Bryce and create unexpected atmospheres from post to post. This one is particularly fit for reverie, along with your superb poetry.
schonee
Excellent work! Well done!
Zazou
Excellent work and beautiful poem !
vaggabondd
This is very nice work as always my friend :)
tennesseecowgirl
So wonderful..
beachzz
I feel as though I cold wrap myself up in this, and be comforted.
amota99517
Wow! This is awesome and then some.
Richardphotos
very unique terrain Linda and outstanding work
pops
I like this-really has an eery feeling to it
junge1
Neat!
katy555
Beautiful composition and fantastic colors…
carlx
Dreamy done!!!
Danny_G
Great image!!
Eleandras
Wonderful composition and poem!