Broken Promise #1 Page 3 Complete by DrMcQuark
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Description
Our heroine wanders through more of the destruction of the colony, only to make a horrible discovery.
Moving right along so there will be more on the way soon.
Feedback and comments are welcomed.
Enjoy!
Comments (6)
Tholian
Except for the color switch in panel three the rendering for the panels is a great sequence for your setup here. The "teddy" monster is a nice touch. Nicely done burning ruins.
ldgilman
Excellent on story, renders and posing. I don't mind the color switch as it shows a change from internal conversation to external conversation. I just wonder about the green. I know it provides a good contrast and is easy to read, but by the same token, green is a color of good (verses red) also the color of spring and the color to move forward. I am wondering if black with white or gray lettering would not have worked as well. Just a thought and way to late to change it now. Keep 'em coming, I am very curious as to what is next.
magnus073
Great work once more Patrick as this series really has kicked off with such a bang and continues so well here. Fantastic job on the desolation and those effects as it really looks so hopeless. Awesome buildup to the final panel that has me eagerly waiting for the next page now.
alKhall
I agree with Magnus, this series looks great and looking forward to more action!! :0)
drahzar
Excellent on story, renders and posing
jenwencheng
Moving along nicely --- the last panel is a great -- makes the reader wanting to see the next page.