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~*~ No Greater Pain Than Regrets ~*~

DAZ|Studio Story/Sequential posted on Aug 17, 2009
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Bomaw
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Written by MKeyes
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There was a lot on Bart's mind as he sat in his farm house kitchen late that night. His wife was gone, off to see about their missing daughter, Kathy Ann. 4th child of 5 - 3 sons first, Shawn, Derrick and Jake, and then his two daughters, Kathy-Ann and Shanna. His nights were often spent thus, reflecting back, just as he did now, blowing the match out after lighting his pipe... "Lord, God - it's me again, Bart - you know me, I've come to you before. Been coming to you since my daddy taught me how, him being a baptist preacher. Lord, I'm gettin' old, I feel it more and more everyday. I ache everywhere Lord, everywhere - but there is no ache, more painful than that - in my heart. Won't be long now Lord, for I'm to face you, and well - as you know, I've done some wrong, made a few messes here and there. I need to confess some things Lord, before I leave this earth - things concerning what I seen, that ugly night, long time ago - before I left for that damn war in Vietnam. You know what night I'm talking about Lord, you know what night. I may be - maybe - could've saved that young man Lord, maybe I could have. And because I didn't - I thought you - made me pay, by raising his son as my own - my eldest, Shawn." Bart stopped there, thinking about his wife, a young woman, caught up in the King marches for equal rights of the Negro. So caught up, that while he was in Vietnam, she was there, falling for a black young man heavily involved in the sit ins at restaurants, water fountains, bathrooms. He knew because word spread fast in small towns, and certainly in the one he'd come from. Begging need for a leave, he'd snuck back, secretly following her, watching her, and sure enough, she'd been with him, the black boy, Edwin Piercy. He'd watched the whole time they were together, sneaking about in the secret of darkness, and then he'd dropped her off - at home, safe and sound. Jealousy and humiliation shot thru Bart that night. Thinking back, he remembered holding onto the gun, his intent to scare him off and warn that he was not to see her ever again. She was after all, his girlfriend and yes, white. The two of them messing about while he was about to be sent off to war. And then, right before he could follow through on his intent, a truck pulled up, loaded with hooded men. Bart had frozen behind the tree, watching horrified by the things they did as they surrounded him. All he had to do, was shoot his gun into the air, stop them before it was too late. Instead, the sounds of his screams made him back away, covering his ears, he rushed off deep into the woods, away from the nightmare, disappearing - heading back to the fort. The next day, he left for Vietnam. As one of the lucky ones, he was injured and sent back and in the hospital, he lay learning that his girlfriend, his wife to be, was with child. Use the login above, head for the site to learn more about Bartholomew Jacob McPherson and his three sons, two daughters, his wife, his past ... their lives today. Second Part below "Shawn - time to go home" - thanx to those who checked it out, as well todays... ShawnFlight-thumb.jpg Credits: M4 complete Set prop - bits and pieces from Daz3d Kelly Lodge Table from RDNA P.I.C.K Food stuffs from Medieval Travern by Faveral

Comments (18)


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MagikUnicorn

11:07AM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Beautiful scene Gorgeous details ;-)

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anitalee

11:08AM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Awesome work

Azurra

11:09AM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Fantastic! Excellent work! 5+!

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virginiese

11:16AM | Mon, 17 August 2009

great complexe scene ! Nice render

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Savage_dragon

11:24AM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Cool story n' render! ")

M2A

1:15PM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Superb detailed room. Character is friendly and warm.

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ToniDunlap

3:24PM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Oh that story! And Bart with his demons. Great scene Sis. Depicts everything perfectly. Gripping, this wonderful art and Bart, the man, father and husband he is. Bomaw is the most addicting read ever. Keep up this magnificent work.

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magnus073

5:07PM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Mercy all I can say is this is once again a winner and pulled me right in the moment I saw it. You have such a talent for setting up a scene that reaches out and reminds everyone of a family member they had that they can relate to this character. For me it was my Grandfather who would set like this thinking back out on the front porch as I grew up. It seems Bart had so much to think over and almost more regrets if not for fate stepping in. It's a shame and surely had to haunt him that all he needed to do was fire a warning shot to help a fellow human being out. Even though he felt wronged by him I'm sure the guilt must have ate away at him

ubald

6:57PM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Very nice work;) and Great story. I have to say I love the Smoke! very well done as is all elements in this render, Always a treat..CHEERs

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doarte

7:05PM | Mon, 17 August 2009

I ditto what dave said (*magnus073) Grand work Maxi

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Niha

7:55PM | Mon, 17 August 2009

Too bad that I can say how regrets are very PAINFUL! Awesome work here Mercy! Great smoke and fire effects by the way... Oh I feel his pain!

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mikeerson

1:45AM | Tue, 18 August 2009

You weren't kidding, he's got a lot on his mind (or is that your mind - lol)... the expression is priceless.... Maybe in a future upload you can have him thinking back again as the match burns down to his finger tips - ouch! Like that never happens to any of us daydreamers - lol

RundwulfWolfShield

5:28AM | Tue, 18 August 2009

Another excellent piece!

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Cimaira

10:23AM | Tue, 18 August 2009

Excellent image and sad, yet gripping story! Excellent work on all fronts.

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Thetis

2:31PM | Wed, 19 August 2009

Superb character study. everything fits, excellent work

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Mondwin

2:57AM | Fri, 21 August 2009

Sad story..superbly character my Dear...bravissima!V:DDD.Hugsxx Whylma

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ArtistKimberly

8:41PM | Sat, 12 September 2009

(ºO•-)•––––––––•(-• •°• °• Magnificent •°•°• •-)•––––––––•(-•Oº)

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vice

10:43AM | Tue, 29 September 2009

wow thats a lot to bear it matches the souless gaze on his face!


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