Everyone Wants To Be Us by vaggabondd
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Description
Close your eyes my friend
Feel the wind surround us
Combine us
In twine us
Make us one
In the passion of the night
Listen to the seagulls
Sing us a song
As the moon light
Turns the beach into center stage
And the waves
Clap against the rocks
Applauding your beauty
And my luck
And although the world
Is dead to us
We are life to the world
And everyone wants to be us
Comments (16)
eekdog
well spoken poetry..
beachzz
beautiful words!!
Faemike55
Wonderful words
miashadows
This is very beautiful ,if only those moments could last forever.
adrie
Beautiful Poem my friend!
Rainastorm
Ohhh very sweet words Randy....makes a gal wanna be there....well said :-)
flaviok
Profundo e verdadeiro, um brilhante poema que traz muita reflexão meu amigo, aplausos (5)
auntietk
Wow. Great phrasing and cadence. This has a wonderful rhythm to it. Nicely done!
brycek
Lovely words!!
Lisajobb
I can't tell you how much I love your work. It always sends that shiver down the back of my neck. Your poem about my last image was superb and it fitted incredibly well with what she may have been thinking as she looked out at the waves. Lots more please!
myrrhluz
Great imagery and rhythm. Flows like a song.
hipps13
wonderful work, Randy warm hugs, Linda
lunchlady
Beautiful!
Merrylee
Did those words really come out of Randy's brain???...lol....very nice
BiggDevo
Long time no talk, Your work is wonderful, sorry I have not visited more often. I appreciate all of you my friends here. Sometimes I feel you are the only ones that I can communicate with... Take care
CosmicPsycho
I really like it :) Very fitting title too. Great work X Nari