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I'm not satisfied with the lighting on this one, but I've spent enough time at it (and I'm also not sure what to change, save that the left side of the image doesn't really "work"). Suggestions? Feedback is always appreciated.
Thanks for the comments on my last upload, "Daeva"!
Comments (20)
mgtcs
Absolutely amazing composition, excellent outfits and expressions, very well done! 10+
KaiArt
Beautiful work!
Tracesl
wonderful scene
anitalee
Looks wonderful to me
crender
Awesome!!!
PSDuck
Really cool work!
FutureFantasyDesign
Maybe a little post work lighting? Say in front of her and add a touch of a darker shadow onto the characters behind her? By the pose and expression one might think she was 'shielding' them? If so the girl behind maybe needs 'darker' eyes possibly. She just seems detached from his expression and the main characters expression. I do love the main characters pose and 'attitude'! :) Ariana
lillywhitelilith
maybe showing what the guy is doing, right now he is staring at the wall, otherwise it looks great.
AlysiaSkye
This one turned out great. I love the contrast in expressions. The hint of something sparkly/glowy in the lower left area might work.
Raddar
LOL I know exactly how you feel. You stare at an image long enough, push pixles around on it long enough, and it gets harder to tell what it is that just doesn't sit right with you. In all honesty I think the image looks great. The only minor sugestion I can offer is that it appears that the light source is primarily from the left. Maybe if you appied some stronger highlights to the female standing, then applied shadows to the two crouching. Still I think the image works well as is, I love the female with the sword. :)
SetoKaiba
Fantastic image, great scene, pose and characters! I can see a lot of creativity here, fine work, well done!
thecytron
Xcellent composition!
tamburro
Fantastic composition, excellent work!!!!! Bravo!!! Hugs.
cjn
beautiful done.great pose and light
dbrv6
Its a great scene but tricky from a story perspective - its like walking into the middle of something while not understanding what went before and what is important. Like why is it necessary that she has a sword out and why is he hesitating over opening the vault on the wall. Not a fan either of using samurai swords and elves either but that's a personal quirk.
drifterlee
This is cool!!
NetWorthy
Hmm, maybe try "cool" light fom the left: It will tend to emphasize the cold stone and the sense of foreboding? I like the image a lot as-is, but the overall effect of the lighting is "cheery" and "warm", but the characters don't seem that way. Notice the cool light already on the marble? I think that is the same color glow you should use from the left. My two cents, probably worth every penny LOL!
mtalin
Beautiful render and poses, you don't need to change a thing on this, looks great already.
ArtistKimberly
(ºO•-)•––––––––•(-• •°• °• An Outstanding Image •°•°• •-)•––––––––•(-•Oº)
adorety
Beautifully done as is, great detail and poses. Maybe a moonglow through the window?