Castles Made of Sand {A Sadness Befalls Her} by Steeleyes101

Poser • Story/Sequential • posted on Oct 20, 2009

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A little Indian brave who before he was ten, played war games in the woods with his Indian friends, and he built a dream that when he grew up, he would be a fearless warrior Indian Chief. Many moons passed and more the dream grew strong, until tomorrow He would sing his first war song, And fight his first battle, but something went wrong, Suprise attack killed him in his sleep that night. And so castles made of sand, melts into the sea eventually... color=ff33ff> "Why should I suddenly think of my lover and sing such a sad song" Naomi wonders. ~Castles Made of Sand~ Jimi Hendrix Naomi character ~ Echo Genisis freebee by dayna2 Rickenbacker 350 Liverpool freebee by 3dpmr Thanks guys

Comments (19)

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Steeleyes101

11:08PM | Tue, 20 October 2009

Still trying to get the lighting thing down. Not enough dramatic shadows in this one but I just wanted to get past it and move on. Any suggestions or ideas how you would have done this much appreciated. My eyes are not so good any more so please tell me if you think the over all scene is too light or dark. Thanks much Steel

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mgtcs

11:11PM | Tue, 20 October 2009

Amazing my dear friend, she's gorgeous! Perfect background and beautiful story, reminds me of Neil Gaiman! Congratulations! 10+

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PHELINAS

11:27PM | Tue, 20 October 2009

Very beautiful story my dear friend.Very good background work ( the fuzziness) and drawing of the figure.Félicitations )+

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3DClassics123456

11:52PM | Tue, 20 October 2009

Beautiful story. I play rock, hard rock, blues, pop and folk in a band every week. The only sand castle I built when I was young was for the Humankind...I lost my hopes to see all the Peoples live together in Peace and Friendship.

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DennisReed

3:37AM | Wed, 21 October 2009

Excellent Elliot! Sorry I did not make the connection to Jimi Hendrix's "Castles Made of Sand" when I 1st saw this! ;) I like the change you did make! The song by the way can be heard here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YF4-r2MpRMs

HungryDead

4:37AM | Wed, 21 October 2009

I'm not too good with lighting my self but this looks fine on my calibrated monitor, not overly bright, if that is what you were going for? I personally would have tried to get more pronounced specular hi-lights on the metal components of the guitar like the pickups, frets and strings and perhaps the body if it had a glossy finish... maybe the black nails too. Nice rock visual nonetheless :-)

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dhouck

8:00AM | Wed, 21 October 2009

Very nice. Great Story... I agree with HungryDead.. The Guitar needs more highlights.. more shine. But all in all good job.. really like the lighting effect.

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