Kickboxing by beachzz

Writers • Humor • posted on Oct 24, 2009

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Kickboxing I hurt In parts Of my body I didn't know Could feel pain What was I thinking Sure my friend Said you can Do this it's Not hard She lied I hurt Like hell Ache in Places I Don't use And never should Feel muscles Stretched beyond Any ordinary Capacity Hurt in spots Not used By normal people My instructor Sweet young man He's really a Sadist torturer Hideous creature Who pushes me So far past The limits My body howls In protest Screams in pain Shrieks in agony But omigod Does it feel GOOD Look out World I am woman Strong Powerful And I can Kick your butt If only Mine will stop Hurting 10/14/09

Comments (12)

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auntietk

2:00AM | Sat, 24 October 2009

This is wonderful! You've written a "punch" into this that mirrors your experience at the gym. Excellent work!

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bazza

2:08AM | Sat, 24 October 2009

Great writing Marilyn have felt like that myself at times lol in pain I mean lol wonderful work...

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Arrogathor

2:30AM | Sat, 24 October 2009

Very nice, brings back memories.

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sharky_

3:19AM | Sat, 24 October 2009

When you hear "No Pain No Gain"......Don't believe it! Have fun at it....... Aloha

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durleybeachbum

5:46AM | Sat, 24 October 2009

Hilarious! I LOVE it!

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bmac62

7:15AM | Sat, 24 October 2009

Gee, and here I am still thinking about walking up the steepest, longest hill in town. You've stepped into a new dimension. Wonderfully written,...as a former President used to say, I feel your pain:)

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Meisiekind

10:58AM | Sat, 24 October 2009

Oh but that is good pain and I bet the instructor is worth it... Hehe... Very humorous my friend and please don't tear anything!!! :)

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vaggabondd

2:34PM | Sat, 24 October 2009

lol this is too funny, beautiful journey my friend

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goodoleboy

5:57PM | Sat, 24 October 2009

Most striking prose in re your new found sport, Marilyn! It's one thing to go river rapids boating, dancing, bicycling, skiing, and all the other activities you've participated in, but kickboxing? Ooops and ouch!

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