Where are you ? by bxlblk
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Description
She is hiding in a dark corner but he is not far away. He's going to get her soon......... or....... could it be the other way around ?
Comments (3)
crocodilian
I like the idea. You might consider putting a narrow spot on her. You've established that there are down pointing street lamps in the scene-- there's a nice one on the warehouse building-- so it would make sense. This kind of composition, overall dark with small pools of light, is very dramatic and "film noirish" Another idea from the film noir style: make the background very foggy, and the stalker just a silhouette in the fog . . . a foreground light on her. As it is, the background detail is a little "busy"-- its a nice model and a nice render, but it draws the eye away from the central tension of the scene.
Cimaira
Wonderful work! Excellent set up
bxlblk
Thanks for the detailed comments ! I can think of a second version indeed based on your ideas ;)