Aranée 35: Another Mystery Resolved
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"Most impressive - well done Aranée!" Galen handed the practice blades to the training officer. "And well done to you too, she has progressed more rapidly than I could have imagined." Galen returned that morning, found her training in the courtyard, and decided to test her.
The man smiled. "Thank you Sir Galen, but in truth the lady has a special aptitude for this." He turned to Aranée. "M'Lady, you learn very rapidly - and that Elvish speed of yours makes you unpredictable and nearly unbeatable." He paused and looked at Galen. "I believe there is really only one person - other than you - who can take her further."
Galen smiled. "I believe you are correct. Can you ask her to join us?"
The man left with a courteous half bow, and returned a few moments later.
When Aranée looked up her jaw fell open. Mubela stood next to the man, regarding her with twinkling eyes. The friend Aranée thought she knew looked very different than she had ever seen her. Mubela wore beautiful clothing quite well, but now she stood just as comfortably before her - in battle-worn warrior's garb.
Mubela broke into an impish smile. "Close your mouth dear, it's not too attractive that way. Well, well. Once again you need me to teach you something - I think I may start charging you for tutoring services!"
"Well, I... I think you need to tell me what is going on."
Mubela nodded. "My people were a warrior clan famed for our fighting ability, but our enemies banded together to wipe us out." She paused. "When my village was overrun, I was in bed, feverish and weak from a bad wound. I was captured and sold to people who could profit from my skills." She nodded towards Galen. "I left a bit out of Galen's story: Jobil rescued TWO people from a floating timber that day - and I helped Galen put down Jobil's mutiny. Later, when Jobil made Galen captain of the soldiers - I became head of his personal bodyguard. I am also a special messenger and chief combat instructor for his soldiers."
Aranée looked at her with questioning eyes. "So why the big secret?"
Mubela sighed, a hint of sadness in the corners of her eyes. "I want friends... romance... and over time it has became very, very clear... people will avoid anyone who intimidates them..."
Aranée breathed a sigh of relief. "This explains a great deal, why you are gone so much..." She looked at Mubela. "You couldn't attend the gala because you were on duty that evening - that is it isn't it."
Mubela nodded. "That is the truth of it." Smiling at Aranée, she took a practice blade from the training officer and hefted it. "Now, I understand you need instruction in areas other than clothing or hair." Her nose crinkled as her mouth drew into a wicked smile. "Shall we be on with it?"
--- TO BE CONTINUED!
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Busy busy busy. The holidays are crunch time for the food closet, our church, my clients, my family. I'll try to post at least one new episode a week - BTW, the next one is a biggie.
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Image and story © 2009 by Larry Hodge
Comments (16)
PhilW
A wonderful scene (great expressions!) and a nice twist in the story! Keep 'em coming - thanks to the teaser on the next scene, we will wait with baited breath!
Faemike55
Fantastic!!!! Great scene and wonderful and humorous story! Waiting for the next chapter
magnus073
Wonderful work on this one Larry as you have the characters poses and expressions perfect for the scene. So glad to hear your helping out with the food closet in your area, that is a great thing to do to help those in need.
jandunne
I too can't wait for the next installment. Great scene and facial expressions on your characters
Cimaira
Fantastic image and great chapter! I hope you can make time for weekly episodes, but real life calls this time of year for all of us :)
neelzonline
Another enjoyable story and image. Keep them coming.
Minda
great scene and story larry..wonderful work as always!
brewgirlca
Nicely done Larry. You did a great job on Aranee's shocked expression. The story is excellent and you do fine job of adding twists and turns into the plot. As always the story reads clear and true.
restif
Nice addition and composition on this!
adrie
Wonderful composition my friend, excellent work in every way.....love also the story.
densa
wonderful scene
PSDuck
Great, Miss M gets fleshed out, finally! Cool!
tennesseecowgirl
Nice writing .. appears I need to go back a bit here .... :)
amirapsp
Love your stories
myrrhluz
What I like best about this episode are the expressions and the way they are all interacting with each other by their expressions. There is surprise, confusion and a little hesitation on Aranée's face as she begins to understand the situation and the reasons for the secrecy. I like Galen sidewards glance full of amusement, curiosity and I think pleasure for the friendship of Aranée and Mubela. Mubela is looking straight at Aranée gaging her reaction. I think she doesn't doubt that Aranée's reaction will be favorable, but is stalwartly facing the need to let Aranée know of some of the hardships that are a part of her life and is glad that the need for subterfuge is over. I love Mubela's pose which is also very strong and self-possessed. Beautiful definition and shadows on Mubela's skin! Excellent image and story!
RJS
Wonderful! The framing and posing in this image are excellent, but the expressions are absolutely outstanding! You have conveyed so much information in the looks these three are giving each other, it almost tells the story without words. But your narrative goes even further. Another amazing revelation, and a truly wonderful development. I think I'm falling in love with this Mubela character, LOL! Now I can't wait to see what happens next. On to the next image...