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The Pegasus

Critique Mythology posted on Nov 30, 2009
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project_nemesis

6:59AM | Tue, 01 December 2009

the study of light is very good; there's no obvious join between horse and wing, but there are a few big problems. #1: the texture on the wing is extremely stretched, look for higher quality feather or more bumped/detailed wing textures #2: the wing has no shadow on the floor, like the rest of the horse, #3: depth of field is variable ~ look at the blur on the horse's ears and tail vs. the horizon or wing tips. The wing tips (close) and horizon (far) need to be blurred, and the body of the horse should remain sharp. Nice concept though, and apart fromt he detail, well executed.

G.T.

2:29PM | Mon, 07 December 2009

I revised the image according to the critique


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