When you left me by Lisajobb
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When you left me
I thought "Its not so bad"
I can carry on with life
Its not so sad.
Then a soft breeze found me hiding
And as I looked into the sky
It came, an avalanche
And only my eyes were dry.
Comments (9)
dogmanblues
dude,no image.
vaggabondd
Very powerful with so few words, very nice
bazza
Lovely words Lisa though a little sad.. well done!!
Faemike55
Wow! Very moving!
lior
So powerful!!!
jeroni
excelente
elfin12u
Been there,.....your words are so apt!!
myrrhluz
A self deceiving lie in the first stansa and the unavoidable reaction in the second. Beautiful imagery in the words "a soft breeze found me hiding" Excellent work!
kasalin
Nice writing, dear Lisa very well written !!! 5***** Excellent :)