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Back Draft: Part II

Vue Story/Sequential posted on Dec 17, 2009
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The fire continued to move faster than DeeAnna could run. She refused to give up and pushed her straining lungs and muscles harder. Tthe flames gradually surrounded her. Heat and smoke pressed down choking her. The small dry patch of green upon which she ran rapidly shrank. The flames controlled everything; even her route. Ahead, the fire completed its encirclement of her. Where the two lines of fire had joined, the flames were smaller, the line thinner than anywhere else. If she could burst through, she would be in a spot still untouched by the fire. Instinct made her want to flinch away, to just stop in the center of the rapidly diminishing green. Fighting her panic, she forced herself to charge through the wall of flames. The flames scorched her skin and clothes, but DeeAnna burst through the fire. The smoke was so thick she could hardly see anything. Trees loomed out of the smoke. Thickets grabbed at her. She blindly careened through them until she stepped where there was no ground. DeeAnna tumbled into a brook. Dazed, she looked around. Fire had crossed over to the other bank, engulfing both sides of the stream. The water wasn't deep--a couple of feet at best. Bits of charged wood, ash, and badly burned corpses of small animals floated down the current. DeeAnna made sure she was thoroughly soaked, rolling over and submerging herself as much as possible before checking herself for injuries. She found only a few burns, bruises, and scrapes. The air just above the water provided a cool buffer to the heat from the fire. If DeeAnna sat up, her head was immersed in thick, choking smoke, but air just a foot or two above the brook was much more breatheable. DeeAnna crawled down the stream, hoping to find a deeper pool. She had no sense of time or distance traveled. Time was now. Where was here. Still, she kept moving downstream. (To be continued....) _______________________________________________________ This was supposed to be the easy render. Had the figure already? And a lot of the fire props, etc. Wrong! My Poser 6 wipes out its Pose Room whenever I try to load a V4 and up figure. So I had to re-create my character. The loading time for using V4 on my computer is very long, despite 3GBs of RAM. Then, Captain Dum-Dum invariably would add a skinmat that apparently had no texture file--again and again. This would put my Poser in lah-lah land forever and I'd have to shut it down. Finally got it done, so here it is. Thanks for all the fantastic and encouraging and helpful comments on this series. Jeremy CREDITS: Figure: Victoria 4.2++ with "Leah" head morph from "Everywoman," Arcebus's "Dirty Girl" skinmats, and 3dreams's "Boy Hair. Her clothing is Ravenhair's "Miss Dee Anna J" with Moyra's "Perils" textures. Fire materials and props: Monsoon's "Fire Scenes for Vue6" (Cornucopia3d).

Comments (20)


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Steeleyes101

6:18PM | Thu, 17 December 2009

Nice work here my friend Love the way you put this one together Bravo and hats off for this one

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shadownet

6:28PM | Thu, 17 December 2009

Not a place I would want to be! I remember hearing about a forest ranger who got caught in a really bad forest fire. No stream around for him, just trees and grass on fire all around him, with no way out. So he really thought the gig was up, but that will to survive made him try. So he found an area that had a good bit of exposed earth and scrapped out a shallow grave with his hands, and laid face down, pulling in a much dirt as he could on top of himself. He should have died, and was badly burned, but lived to tell about it.

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waldodessa

6:45PM | Thu, 17 December 2009

Beautiful work Jeremy!

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tcombs

7:08PM | Thu, 17 December 2009

I can feel the heat!

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Ravyns

8:34PM | Thu, 17 December 2009

Awesome scene & story!!!

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geirla

9:27PM | Thu, 17 December 2009

Nicely done! And a scary image. I don't like fire.

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emmecielle

4:55AM | Fri, 18 December 2009

A scene very dramatic! Excellent work, Jeremy! :)

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mininessie

8:37AM | Fri, 18 December 2009

wow...is fantastic my friend!!!

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e-brink

3:59PM | Fri, 18 December 2009

An interesting escape route. Nicely done.

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necrophage

6:15AM | Sat, 19 December 2009

dramatic scene and cool pov!

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grafikeer

9:30PM | Sun, 20 December 2009

Very creative scene,great fire effects!

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RG19

4:30PM | Mon, 21 December 2009

She fights on!!! Super work!!!

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mermaid

5:28PM | Mon, 21 December 2009

very fine work, Jeremy, and a fine story too...smile... and how come I know about those renders problems...lol... trying to do a render right now for a contest over at cornucopia and vue kept on freezing and crashing in a row and even tricked me by forgetting the registration key on a crash and starting up as a complete different version. Had to reinstall and copy and paste all my folders twice which took me hours...lol But especially your continous support and wonderful comments make it worth all the trouble...smile...

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Eldeago

10:11PM | Mon, 21 December 2009

woe perilous position.

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efron_241

2:25AM | Wed, 23 December 2009

let's hope she will be alright Great days for you Merry Christmas and a great and artistic new Decennium May you make all your dreams come true in 2010 !!!! and the years beyond...

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NetWorthy

12:33AM | Thu, 24 December 2009

Very interesting story, please keep it going!

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Spacer_01

11:57AM | Thu, 24 December 2009

Nice continuation in the series. Love the story and the turns it took sofar. The effects are great, the brook, water, surrounding fire, and the dirtied scruffed looking DeeAnna. I know, I need to pickup and continue my own series. Keep up the good work.

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FrenchKiss

11:44AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

Really fantastic illustration of an exciting story!

gojira

8:04AM | Fri, 01 January 2010

Great pose & fire effects . . . ! Super story . . . !

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ontar1

8:06PM | Sun, 03 January 2010

Fantastic scene and tale, outstanding work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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