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A Single Drop Of Rain

Writers Surrealism posted on Dec 26, 2009
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A single raindrop fell today It landed right on my heart And drenched me I am weak And crippled By this single drop of rain Because it hurt someone I love And caused twice the amount of pain Now I have been expecting this Single drop of rain But no matter how much you expect it It still hurts clear down to your soul When there is nothing you can do Except just try and be there for them But there is hope There is always hope That the sun will come out And chase away our pain

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beachzz

9:59PM | Sat, 26 December 2009

The sun does come out eventually. Only time will mend our hearts.

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myrrhluz

12:05AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

Being there is a lot. Excellent poem.

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Faemike55

12:06AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

Beautiful

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brycek

2:13AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

Lovely poem!!

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flaviok

4:36AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

Tocante e maravilhos poema meu amigo, uma expressão da alma, aplausos (5)

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adrie

5:12AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

Beautiful poem Randy, love it.

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Lisajobb

5:56AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

The sun always always comes out at some point. very sad and poignient

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Rainastorm

9:41AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

I hope the sun comes out for your friend soon:-)

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miashadows

9:59AM | Sun, 27 December 2009

Very beautiful and touching.....

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Merrylee

12:20PM | Sun, 27 December 2009

This one fits me perfect...if you get a chance call me and I will tell you about my Christmas day bad experience and the sun did come out the next day, late in the afternoon....Your friend almost lost her mind...not really...excellent poem

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hipps13

4:09PM | Sun, 27 December 2009

beautiful work, Randy warm hugs, Linda

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Primal

10:01AM | Mon, 28 December 2009

i will be looking for that sunlite..Excellent!

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wysiwig

2:48AM | Tue, 29 December 2009

Reminds me of the nursery rymn "Rain, rain, go away. Come again some other day." Powerful words.

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gypsyflame

1:04PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

Another one beautifully written Randy!


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