Canals of New mars: The Traitor by flavia49
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Their moral bolstered by the modified tattoo, JS and Eve jumped into work with renewed vigor. JS had never actually stopped nudging the pilots to train new personnel. "The next battle'll be in the outer space" was his refrain. When the pilots remarked that 6 spacecrafts were a bit too few against the Bloody Dawn and the Rogue fleet, JS stated with adamantine certainty: "Spacecrafts are easily found, good pilots aren't!"
The NMA soon split into two factions, one whispering that special forces' members knew strange voodoo spells and that JS's particular expertise would solve the situation. Others, however, favored more a conspiracy theory, that is that JS had never really resigned and GOD would come to their rescue.
People bet on it. But the conspiracy theory might create troubles with the Martians, so Vasquez and Ishikawa asked JS formally if he expected help from GOD.
"No, GOD won't help us." was his reply. "At best, the EA will sent some drones to observe the Bloody Dawn in action. For years, there were talks about this Rogue cruiser capable of unleashing Armageddon and GOD won't miss the chance to see her at work. But soon we'll have a cruiser and fighters and we must have pilots."
The answer convinced everyone that JS was waiting for another load of smuggled supplies, even if running a cruiser looked a bit above even JS's league. "Voodoo" muttered the magic theory's supporters and grinned.
There were no sign of the mythical S'skash ship, however.
"It's my fault, it's because I'm an alien." a frustrated JS cursed.
"No, it isn't," Eve countered, "It's the ship's. She never had a captain. We can talk to Adam and my mother, maybe we missed something." Eve suggested and JS nodded.
After a night's deep thought, at dawn they were almost hopeless and exhausted when Adam came out: "Eve, those old scrolls, do you remember?"
"Yes, the old queen considered them useless,.. they're in the old house. I'm going to take them."
"OK. I've a briefing. Let's meet here in an hour." JS said.
In the old house together with the scrolls Eve found the bag that JS had brought when he had returned from Earth. This and a JS's old T-shirt that she had used to wrap the scrolls, triggered memories into Eve's mind. She remembered when JS had woken first. She had felt his distrust in his questions and she'd been afraid she'd been wrong in her choice. The next day JS was still so weak that he almost fell as he tried to get up. She had helped him and his bare chest rubbed against her nipples. She'd felt a rush of hot blood, but had managed to say: "Sit here, please, I take some clothes." He'd grinned in roguish embarrassment, his silver-gray eyes full of warmth chaining hers. He had thanked with a deep and raspy voice that made her insides turn to lava. Eve smiled and thought, "And I fell in love!". Then she gave herself a shake, took the bag and left.
"My lady, may I speak? It's important!".
Eve watched the man. She knew him, a Martian deformed since birth due to clumsy use of forceps at the Galactic Salvation mission's hospital. A lonely embittered man who had always lived on the Bradburyton skid row. Feeling sorry for him, Eve asked politely. "What is it, Suish?"
"My lady, chasing a puppy slugh in the Naga's temple I found some things. I know that the Earthener Commander goes crazy for this stuff. But I'm afraid of ruining everything, I'm so clumsy ... If you want to come, I'll show you."
Eve thought that the temple was inside the security perimeter and that perhaps it was important. "Let's go!" she said.
"It's there!" Suish said, pointing to the platform inside the temple. Eve went to the altar. The electro-shock of a XREP stungun struck Eve, making her unconscious.
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Comments (57)
lyron
Excellent work!!
Miska7
Very nice scene. Too dark for my old monitor, after adjusting the brightness i see it well. Great characters, poses and lighting! Really well done.
Faemike55
Excellent work and a new twist to the story Can't wait to see what JS does with this
mapps
excellent :-) hugs
lior
So wonderful render!
Star4mation
Nicely done Flavia :)
flaviok
"After a night's deep thought, at dawn they were almost hopeless and exhausted when Adam came out: "Eve, those old scrolls, do you remember?"" "Após profunda reflexão de uma noite, de madrugada eles estavam quase sem esperança e esgotados quando Adão saiu: "Eva, os rolos de papel velho, você se lembra?"" Impressiona sempre o ritmo sequencial e inspirado que das a narrativa minha amiga, sempre prendendo a atenção e criando o inesperado...magnifico, assim como ilustras de uma maneira brilhante a obra, impressioca sempre. Excelente como sempre, aplausos (5)
jmb007
beau travail!!
jeroni
Fabulous
claude19
SPLENDID back! Very dark scene....wpnderful !
MOSKETON
FANTASTICA CREACION.
tamburro
Fantastic image and great text!!!!!!!!!!! Hugs:)
Minda
wonderful image and great story ..
drifterlee
Gorgeous lighting!!
jocko500
this is wonderful looking here
Biffowitz
Fabulous work, I loved the full size view!
1358
plot thickens.... very cool image, darkness is so hard to do!
mgtcs
WOW....Fantastic story my dear, lovely scene, excellent as always, love it!
brycek
Wonderful scene and lighting..well done!!
mickeyrony
Hooo…. Dark moments for these members there my Beautiful Cheer still and mile mercies ((5++)) Hooo.... Sombres moments pour ces membres là ma Belle Bravo encore et mile mercis ((5++))
psyoshida
Wonderful story! The lighting really sets the mood. Wonderfully detailed scene. Surprise ending, I'll stay tuned....
myrrhluz
Exciting story and wonderful image. Excellent golden tones and lighting. I like the lighting on her face and neck. Beautifully done!
clbsmiley
Cool installment!!!! nice scene... great story going... left us hanging..
bazza
Excellent story and left on a high tender hooks as to what is going to happen next, well done Lovely work on this! Nice render too. well done!!
9002434
Interesting text. Superb atmosphere and good lights. Bravo!!
ssteph
Splendid
renecyberdoc
i like the bare chest rubbing her nipples,heheh. i was waiting along time for the story to continue i was kind of missing it a little,i normally keep your comment for last because i know there is a long story and i want to take my time to read it. and a very complex athmosphere you created here.fine work.fav.
mariogiannecchini
Una bella atmosfera per una bella son le cena rappresentata anche con il racconto piuttosto coinvolgente.
Darkwish
Stunning scene. Very well done.
e-brink
Wonderful eerie atmosphere!