Open Window by hipps13
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Description
At night growing up
Mom and me struggled
Get along could not connect
Even if tried, as much as told
As the breeze blew in a crack
The curtains would fly
Out of bed would stumble
From her room into mine
Surrounded by darkness
Shutting closed bang mad
Frustrated the window wanted open
Fresh air breeze always wanted close
So the bedroom window tempered
Light sleeper alert flew opened
Sleep much not known those days
The covers always rolled over
The pillows would hand fluff
Waiting for the wrath
Stuffy never liked woke
Nor did hear ever knock
The nights always fought
Thoughts mornings were cold
©21 February 2010 LKS
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Thank You
so much appreciated
Comments (19)
tryky5carla
EXCELLENT AND FANTASTIC EFFECTS, GREAT SCENE AND POEM !!!!!!!!!!!!!
unstart
A beautiful render!
mac4gman
I really like the use of color in this one...!
TallPockets
''Sleep much not known those days'' (hipps13): GOOD stuff!! TallPockets has been known to OFTEN PUT peeps TO SLEEP! WINK. My BEST, KIND SOUL. T.P./brian.
MagikUnicorn
Wonderful colours
carlx
Very beautiful colors, light and mood!!!
KaiArt
Excellent work
2Loose2Trek
Beautiful inter-dimensional colors and mood.
mgtcs
Amazing lighting and mood my dear friend, gorgeous poem!
ledwolorz
Beautiful scene and poem,
peedy
Gorgeous image and lighting! Corrie
wysiwig
Wonderful liquid image. Sleep comes easily to the dull-witted while it is often denied a restless and inquisitive mind.
Miska7
Great colours and textures! Very nice render.
auntietk
Various types of control Always a puzzlement Live and let live Just give it a rest But then I wonder About a lot of things
dbrv6
Stunning words - among your best.
B_PEACOCK
Awesome looking colors . Beautiful sweetie
faroutsider
In Canada I had to have an open window, even during the coldest nights. Love the rosy pink morning...
lyron
Awesome image!!!
Zazou
Wonderful words and illustration my friend !